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Well, despite the screwing about with mythology, I loved them. Still do, and the Demigod Files is also pretty good. There have been a few people speculating that there will ...

I think my brain exploded because I was trying not to laugh. Mr. T was by far one of the best characters there. I cant' wait for the download to ...

Okay, some improvements from before. However, you still have slant rhymes. However, these parts: Screams of horror fill the sky, As our dear loved ones die. In my eyes death ...

Thanks for all the critiques! I'll try and fix this up soon. I originally wanted it to have a happy ending with Julia and Aaron having a good home, but ...

I'd recommend any of Danielle Steel's books. They are absolutely heartbreaking. Also, the Drake Sisters series, though I can't remember the author right now.

I'd recommend the Demonata series. It isn't actually superpowers, but they can do pretty much anything with magic. A bit crudely written, but not bad at all. It was intended ...

Okay, I've seen this one. It's getting better. You have some more punctuation in, and it is beginning to sound nicer. Just one minor issue: If only it were not ...

I know Sakura. I love both of them too. But Wuthering Heights was more of my type of romance. Eh. I spent half an hour thinking this over when I ...

Hm, I'd recommend the Drake Sisters novels. They're very good. I especially like Oceans of Fire.

Thank you, LydiaB, Forever Threnody. And to answer your question, I am Emily, and she is Emily. I said this was conversations with myself, didn't I? Yeah, this is kind ...

Excuse me, but you're supposed to review two works before posting any of your own. I'd love to critique this, but I'd appreciate this if you reviewed first. Once you've ...

I loved it. It fit the theme well, and I couldn't spot any problems with this. Nice choice of words, very good rhythm. I wish I could write like you. ...

Actually, all punctuation and spelling mistakes were intentional. This was supposed to symbolize growth. Specifically, my growth as a writer. The second to the last stanza was supposed to mean ...

Thanks for the criticism, I really appreciated it. And about that city/deserted plain comment... Well, the city is divided into rings, with an Inner and Outer Ring. He is in ...

I'm not sure I understand what this is. Is this an actual paper that you are going to submit? If it is, I suggest putting in more detail and putting ...