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Re: Chronicles of Valarian 0: The Fifth of the Four Ancient Foxes
Hello Lezuli, thought I'd go ahead and read your story. The world and universe building is very interesting, with four Great Worlds and their different species. I am excited to ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Running
Hello VioletFanatasy, I hope you are doing well. I'd like to say this short handled itself well, delivered on what it promised, and told a deep story the message it ...
Aug 4, 2020 -
Re: Don't Lose Control
Hello, DeliriumNervosa, came here to out of curiosity, then decided to review. I hope you find this useful and in no way offensive. I will try my best at giving ...
Aug 3, 2020 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Touch the Sky - Chapter Three
Hello, felistia, back again for a review. This book is going very well, with the conclusion of the last still leaving a problem that this book can hopefully resolve. With ...
Aug 3, 2020 -
Re: Outlaw for Hire: Chapter 6
Hello brotherGeo! Finally got around to reviewing. So, without further ado, I'll get started. More important than safety was why he was going down in the first place, he is ...
Aug 3, 2020 -
Re: Memories
Hello, Awru! Decided I would review your poem. Just trying out new genres and feelings. But wow, school ended for you in July 17? School ended in May 22 for ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 23 (Jasmine and the Mind Melter)
Hello, Hattable, I hope you are doing good! I came here after seeing it in the Green Room for about four days now and I thought I'd take the chance ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: Go a Head and Kill Me
When I woke up I was in a dark room. My clothes had been changed. It was so cold. Then the door started sha c king. Why would anyone do ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: Go Ahead and Kill Me
Okay, what the heck did I read? Sorry, um, hello KaPo21, I'm here to review your story! First off I'd like to acknowledge that this is dark. That's cool. I ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: The Night Witch - Prologue: Max (October 1942)
Hello, ImaginaryPoet. Thought I'd go back to chapter one and do a review. Also, I noted they are different stories with different perspectives in the same time. Without further ado, ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Touch the Sky - Chapter Two
Hello felistia, I hope you are well. I came here after reviewing the first chapter, because why not review the second one? Without further ado, I'll get started. So first ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Touch the Sky - Chapter One
Hello, felistia, saw that you made a third book and decided to read it. Without further ado, I'll start. First off, this was fun to read. It brought many things ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: Little Bear
Hello, , hope everything's good. I've come again to read another one of your short stories and then write a review. Wow, this one had me on full alert when ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: What's Insanity
Hello, ! I saw the title and decided I'd give it a read. And even though it was way shorter than most of the other works I normally read, this ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: Outlaw for Hire: Chapter 5
Hello, brotherGeo, hope everything's going well! Your Outlaw for Hire novel is very fun to read, even if I'm not old enough to pass the age check. Nevertheless, I'll still ...
Jul 28, 2020
