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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer Song

    Hello there, @rosette! Nice to meet you! I am here to review your wonderful work. //bows// I want to begin with the imagery you have in this poem. Am-a-zing! This ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Just a memory

    Hiya! Berri here for a review! °˖ ✧◝(○ ヮ ○)◜✧˖ ° Wow, this was deep. Short, sweet, but deep. In a good way too- it gets you thinking about memory ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: a cup full of regret

    Hiya! Berri here for a review! ヽ( ‘ω’ )ノ First off, thank you for giving the word "wanderlust" a bit of attention- it's a great word and deserves the spotlight. ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vanilla is the best flavor in the world because it is my favorite and y'know stuff

    Hiya! Berri here with a review!ヾ(●・◇・●)ノ I relate to this poem on a deep personal level. Vanilla is objectively the best flavor out there!!! I'm really happy that it's getting ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Would you be Vexed? Shakespearean Sonnet: 14 lines of iambic pentameter.

    Hiya! I’m Berri! (●⌒∇⌒●) This was fascinating. It was definitely an interesting read, and although I couldn't draw any parallels from this to anything else I know, that's good because ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The view of Borderline personality disorder.

    Hi! Berri here for a review! (・∀・○) This hit me right in the face with emotion and relatable wording. This shows how I feel all the time. All the time. ...

    Apr 25, 2018
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Literature Re: -

    Hiya! Berri here with a small review! (人 •͈ᴗ•͈) I've been reading The Book Thief for class lately and it's nice to see another story focused on the character of ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: sorry, sorry, sorry

    Hai!! Berri here for a review! ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ I loved the images in this. "...sacrificing herself/in the middle of Father and me, pleading me to stop/spouting toxic..." was just ...

    Apr 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: Chapter 1

    Hi! Berri here for a review! ( ᐛ )و For someone who doesn't normally review novel chapters, this was very well-written. (⌒▽⌒) I don't normally read religious chapters either, so ...

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Scarred Rainbow

    Heya! Berri here for a review! ଘ(੭ˊ꒳ˋ)੭✧ Let me begin by saying, if this is really based on true events, was this what you described in your speech last trimester? ...

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: "Introduction" Book Review

    Hello! Berri here for a review! (´∩ω∩`) This short story is genius. Like, genuinely. This made me laugh a lot. I like the way you took everything cliché and put ...

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue (Lead Me Home)

    Hello! Berri here for a review! (。・ω・。) I want to address the wording in this piece. GORGEOUS. I love the way you use language the way you do, like an ...

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Butterfly Project

    Hello! Berri here for a review! ٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و Let me begin by saying, I love this title. There are so many different connections I can make with butterflies, the biggest being ...

    Mar 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Black Birds Song

    Hiya! Berri here for a review! .。゚+.ヽ( ゝ∀・*)ノ。+.゚ I just want to begin by saying, wow, this poem is beautiful. It captures the images of beauty in the most perfect ...

    Feb 17, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm Sorry

    Hello! Berri here for a review! 。:.゚ヽ(´∀`。)ノ゚.:。+゚ "I'm sorry" has to be the thing I've said the most throughout my entire life. More than I've said the real pronunciation of ...

    Feb 1, 2018


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