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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer Song

    Hello there, @rosette! Nice to meet you! I am here to review your wonderful work. //bows// I want to begin with the imagery you have in this poem. Am-a-zing! This ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Just a memory

    Hiya! Berri here for a review! °˖ ✧◝(○ ヮ ○)◜✧˖ ° Wow, this was deep. Short, sweet, but deep. In a good way too- it gets you thinking about memory ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: a cup full of regret

    Hiya! Berri here for a review! ヽ( ‘ω’ )ノ First off, thank you for giving the word "wanderlust" a bit of attention- it's a great word and deserves the spotlight. ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vanilla is the best flavor in the world because it is my favorite and y'know stuff

    Hiya! Berri here with a review!ヾ(●・◇・●)ノ I relate to this poem on a deep personal level. Vanilla is objectively the best flavor out there!!! I'm really happy that it's getting ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Would you be Vexed? Shakespearean Sonnet: 14 lines of iambic pentameter.

    Hiya! I’m Berri! (●⌒∇⌒●) This was fascinating. It was definitely an interesting read, and although I couldn't draw any parallels from this to anything else I know, that's good because ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The view of Borderline personality disorder.

    Hi! Berri here for a review! (・∀・○) This hit me right in the face with emotion and relatable wording. This shows how I feel all the time. All the time. ...

    Apr 25, 2018
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Literature Re: -

    Hiya! Berri here with a small review! (人 •͈ᴗ•͈) I've been reading The Book Thief for class lately and it's nice to see another story focused on the character of ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: sorry, sorry, sorry

    Hai!! Berri here for a review! ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ I loved the images in this. "...sacrificing herself/in the middle of Father and me, pleading me to stop/spouting toxic..." was just ...

    Apr 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: Chapter 1

    Hi! Berri here for a review! ( ᐛ )و For someone who doesn't normally review novel chapters, this was very well-written. (⌒▽⌒) I don't normally read religious chapters either, so ...

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Scarred Rainbow

    Heya! Berri here for a review! ଘ(੭ˊ꒳ˋ)੭✧ Let me begin by saying, if this is really based on true events, was this what you described in your speech last trimester? ...

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: "Introduction" Book Review

    Hello! Berri here for a review! (´∩ω∩`) This short story is genius. Like, genuinely. This made me laugh a lot. I like the way you took everything cliché and put ...

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue (Lead Me Home)

    Hello! Berri here for a review! (。・ω・。) I want to address the wording in this piece. GORGEOUS. I love the way you use language the way you do, like an ...

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Butterfly Project

    Hello! Berri here for a review! ٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و Let me begin by saying, I love this title. There are so many different connections I can make with butterflies, the biggest being ...

    Mar 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Black Birds Song

    Hiya! Berri here for a review! .。゚+.ヽ( ゝ∀・*)ノ。+.゚ I just want to begin by saying, wow, this poem is beautiful. It captures the images of beauty in the most perfect ...

    Feb 17, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm Sorry

    Hello! Berri here for a review! 。:.゚ヽ(´∀`。)ノ゚.:。+゚ "I'm sorry" has to be the thing I've said the most throughout my entire life. More than I've said the real pronunciation of ...

    Feb 1, 2018


Stories don't end because you stopped paying attention.
— SJ Whitby