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Of course!

Of course! I loved your review and hope you will review more of my work! No judgement in my workspace.

I fixed my mistakes. Thank you for your comment! I love your review!

He wrote this 4 months before his death so he is not alive. He is in the past writing in another perspective.

Thank you so much for your review! Do not be shy about speaking out. I enjoy people critiquing my writing and finding the deep meaning I am putting into it.

I just posted a third chapter.

Thank you so much!

This is the 2nd chapter. So if you continue reading you will know how he died! I'm really excited to write the next chapter!

I'm sorry it's not my best work!

Hi! I hope you enjoy the first chapter of the story! I just like to share that Perdu is French for lost and Ayla means light in the darkness aka ...

Then the poem is amazing!

Thank you so much for your comment!

It was a bell ringer for my class. I regret not putting it in broken paragraphs but that was after I posted it! Thank you for your comment!

Maybe I should continue writing it. Thank you for opening my eyes!

This is so sweet. I enjoy the use of cheeses. It makes me smile and the cheese puns are hilarious. This is a wonderful poem. It is funny and sweet ...