WaitingForLife

Howdy ho and all that jazz! Firstly, I'm sorry for taking this long to harken to this here chapter of yours. I assure you it isn't because I was uninterested; ...

Heya, not quite the morning anymore, but here none-the-less to give my few cents. I'm assuming Jess here is our Earthly protagonist, soon to discover the dimension-travelers, what with the ...

Now this, this is interesting. Heya, Life here, if not to give much general critique, at least to fix up some stylistic stuff-a-ma-joogers. Why I say this is because I ...

Heya, Life here for a quick review! This was well written. You have a strong voice in your narration, backed with a good handling of the words themselves. I've always ...

Heya, Life here to drop a review. :) You did a pretty good job setting up the start of a story. I like the interactions between the characters, befitting their ...

Heya! Life here to polish his reviewing teeth after a longer than usual break. I like this. I could feel the melancholy in between the lines, in the pauses between ...

Heya, once again! Saw your post on my wall and had to come check it out. I'm glad I did. I'd like to congratulate you on your seriously good dialogue, ...

Heya! I think this works well as a prologue - it gives us the background, gives us an objective and introduces the main character. I also liked the quirk with ...

Heya, I've got a suggestion, is all. As it stands now, this is not really a poem. It's a blunt statement of an emotion, which, granted, can work as a ...

Heya! I'd like to start by saying that I love your enthusiasm. Really makes a hermit like me look bad. :D Oh, and welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your ...

Heya, just a quick flash of input from me. First off, I really liked the idea of this poem and the imagery you drew together was much to my liking. ...

Heya, here to review and all that shazaam. Firstly and foremost, a warm welcome to our odd ranks! May you find your stay pleasant. ^^ The idea, though extremely cliché, ...

Heya, good to see newer members with such solid form in their writing. ^^ Your confidence as a writer shines through your sentence structure and choice of words. The rather ...

Heya, Life here to give my two cents! I like the idea of robots and human feelings as a topic. In my mind, it gives a lot of space in ...

I always refrain from commenting on your works, because I can't find much at all to criticize in them and feel as if I can only contribute an empty comment. ...