WJK

To be honest, I'm not convinced that you understand what your writting about. I'm not trying to be rude, but the phrase, "When love can cause depression". That needs to ...

The sectioning of the stanzas really confused me. Ten lines, then five, then four? Perhaps that represents your insecurity slowly fading away and leaving your life for good. Or you ...

I was going to say that the begginning sounded generic and dull, but I think the message overall balances the poem out. I enjoy the simplicity and easy pace that ...

I love this poem, holy crap. I had to read it five times before I was able to understand, but damn that's good. What's so great about it is that ...

This poem kinda hit me hard. If I'm correct, this poem is about the inability to sleep? If so, I can completely relate. I've been an insomniac for quite some ...

Very intense poem. I actually enjoy when poems don't focus on punctuation (in my opinion, punctuation just gets in the way of the meaning). It felt like the peom had ...

I like how this poem is very 'to the point'. Great simple rhyming, good imagery, and I can sense the sorrow that flows through the words (or at least that's ...

Ignoring the fact that I'm not that big a fan of rhyming in poetry, I think it was used properly in this piece. The overall emotional feeling I got from ...