VuzzyCat

This is awesome! It sounds just like the books! I love it!

Nice poem! Just a few nit picks, Angel of Fate should be capitalized. Also, Oh angel of fate it’s not up too you "too" should only be one 'o'. Other ...

Nice poem! Just a few nit picks, Angel of Fate should be capitalized. Also, Oh angel of fate it’s not up too you "too" should only be one 'o'. Other ...

Great job! I loved the poem! It was cool! It did seem like it was forced at times so that is could rhyme, and I didn't see a sylable pattern, ...

Wow, you have thought alot about this. Really good! I can imagine listening to it. I guess the only way to make it better would be to add a second ...

Really good! It flows smoothly, and I didn't see any grammer errors (other then the previous post). I like the idea and the imagery. The rhyme didn't seem forced, and ...

Wow, this is really good. I love how you can feel the emotions. You did a really good job showing how the character feels. I love the rythme too. It ...

I really liked this poem. The metephors were really good, and I loved how the rhyme wasn't forced; it made it easier to read and get in to. I loved ...

That was really good! You had very few grammer mistakes, and the plot was amazing. I loved how you described her nightmare with so much detail and imagery. I really ...

That was really good! I loved the last two lines, they tied it together. Really great job!

Wow! That was really good! I agree with the person above about the stanzas, but other than that, it was great!

I like it! You were right, it is sad, but it is really good. I think that my only suggestion would be to add more of her emotions. It seemed ...

Wow, that is really good. Really, really sad though. I was hoping for a happy ending. It's good though!

That is really good. I like how you made the poem flow smoothly, it makes the feeling of it more noticable. Good job.