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Vivian

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Quiet Voices poem

    Hmm... :D Nice poem Ari. Quiet Voices sounds so interesting. They are our silent encouragement! :D Q^v^ Umm... This is probably to short to be a review. But, the first ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: The girl with roses.

    I can't really help with with the mistakes and stuff, don't even know if there are any. Srry but I'm pretty sure I failed grammar. :( But the poem is ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: A Dreamer by Sight

    Viv here. I knew I'd like this poem. a Dreamer by Sight describing the very essence of a dream. The first stanza kind of sounds nightmare-ish though. After reading it ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Footprints

    Lovely poem, it's great. The first line seems to refer to your avatar though. ^V^ It's true we all the people we meet have a place in our heart, a ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Other » Lyrical, General Re: Have a heart

    Is it wrong that I think this poem is kind of funny?... Hey Ari, Vivian here on your request. I liked the poem from the first stanza and the name. ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: House of Whispers: Prologue

    Hey Liaya this is a very interesting topic for me. The strings of fate that is. ^v^ Dreams too. Who is Ilevial, was it the nightmare? At first it was ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Looked in His Eyes

    Hey H.S.T nice to see you again, sorta. :D Love the poem it almost made me cry. It was so sweet, I like the rhyming. It was very poetic and ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Poem collage

    From poet to poet you are.... a poet? The poem's are very good I especially like Fly. It made me feel like my own feet were leaving the earth behind. ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: For S & K

    Good poem sounds really sad. I got kind of confused with S cause for a second I thought it was a typo. They sound like good people what happened to ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: Two Purple Flowers

    I blame her mother. I like the story it's kind of scary. Don't think I like the mom,you really shouldn't tell your kids stuff like that. Personally I think that ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health Re: On the Edge

    picked this because you said Three Days Grace and the title. Nice opening, it's so dramatic. I like Jeff. When she was going to jump off the first time I ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Hope.

    HOPE!!!... :) I had to do that. I like this is very serene with that deep realistic meaning. I like your simile on hope being a star, it is the ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    Hi there, nice poem. It sounds like you hate the rain. "Rain beads continue, One after the other. And my nerves back forth creep, Cause you don't pause and discontinue." ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: i hear the voices chapter 1

    What's with the spacing for when they talk, is it on purpose? ...Anyway _''. I'm Vivian Rose :) I like your story it was exhilarating and scary. It was very ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mother

    Deep breathe... Hey MysteryMe I like your story. The first thought that came into my mind when I read the title was of a mother that didn't love her child ...

    Aug 28, 2013


Just because you don't feel like a hero in your own story, doesn't mean you're not a hero in someone else's.
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