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Re: Quiet Voices poem
Hmm... :D Nice poem Ari. Quiet Voices sounds so interesting. They are our silent encouragement! :D Q^v^ Umm... This is probably to short to be a review. But, the first ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: The girl with roses.
I can't really help with with the mistakes and stuff, don't even know if there are any. Srry but I'm pretty sure I failed grammar. :( But the poem is ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: A Dreamer by Sight
Viv here. I knew I'd like this poem. a Dreamer by Sight describing the very essence of a dream. The first stanza kind of sounds nightmare-ish though. After reading it ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: Footprints
Lovely poem, it's great. The first line seems to refer to your avatar though. ^V^ It's true we all the people we meet have a place in our heart, a ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: Have a heart
Is it wrong that I think this poem is kind of funny?... Hey Ari, Vivian here on your request. I liked the poem from the first stanza and the name. ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: House of Whispers: Prologue
Hey Liaya this is a very interesting topic for me. The strings of fate that is. ^v^ Dreams too. Who is Ilevial, was it the nightmare? At first it was ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: I Looked in His Eyes
Hey H.S.T nice to see you again, sorta. :D Love the poem it almost made me cry. It was so sweet, I like the rhyming. It was very poetic and ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Poem collage
From poet to poet you are.... a poet? The poem's are very good I especially like Fly. It made me feel like my own feet were leaving the earth behind. ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: For S & K
Good poem sounds really sad. I got kind of confused with S cause for a second I thought it was a typo. They sound like good people what happened to ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Two Purple Flowers
I blame her mother. I like the story it's kind of scary. Don't think I like the mom,you really shouldn't tell your kids stuff like that. Personally I think that ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: On the Edge
picked this because you said Three Days Grace and the title. Nice opening, it's so dramatic. I like Jeff. When she was going to jump off the first time I ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: Hope.
HOPE!!!... :) I had to do that. I like this is very serene with that deep realistic meaning. I like your simile on hope being a star, it is the ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window
Hi there, nice poem. It sounds like you hate the rain. "Rain beads continue, One after the other. And my nerves back forth creep, Cause you don't pause and discontinue." ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: i hear the voices chapter 1
What's with the spacing for when they talk, is it on purpose? ...Anyway _''. I'm Vivian Rose :) I like your story it was exhilarating and scary. It was very ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: Mother
Deep breathe... Hey MysteryMe I like your story. The first thought that came into my mind when I read the title was of a mother that didn't love her child ...
Aug 28, 2013
