Vivian

Okay, so who is June? And is he going backwards in Time or are they going forward? It's really confusing. It's a good story and I'm going on to the ...

Hi Vivian here. This is my first time reading a work by you(I think). I think it's great. The title and the first lines caught my eye, it was a ...

Hey Viv here. I love the poem and the first line. But I don't really get it. The title is "The Things Unsaid" but I don't get how. I know ...

Hey, Viv here. Wow! This is very good and very deep for someone who says they're NOT good at poetry. It's great, but I swore you were talking about a ...

Hey Vivian here. Hey NerdFighter1, nice poem. And it might be a little late but. Welcome to YWS. Like I said the poem was great, but I don't get how ...

I didn't think of that. The suicide. I KNEW she was Evil! She's one helluva clutz findind the wrong person and pointing a gun at him. What kind of Angel ...

There good poems. The first one was almost a little hard to read but they're good. Goodbye is such a hard word, I've never said it though. But I know ...

What do we need time for? I can't answer that. Its a good poem, really serious. We should live in the past but in the present and revel in the ...

Wait what? I see it fit to start like that. Is this a haiku, and what does Anorexia have to do... scratch that. I get how anorexia has to do ...

Hey friend,long time no speak. :) CTW this poem is great, and suits your name. I realize that those of us who enter this site and write things like this ...

I'm speechless, but I'll try and say something. Well first of all, I love your poem. Then again i love anything about love. I like the repetition of the first ...

I feel your pain. What good is your perfect world if perfect means you can't share it? I knew i liked this poem just by the first two lines. It ...

Viv here from Rouge. Very nice poem Dreamwalker. The title caught me, so I'm wondering if you're saying that you're both disasters or you're fixing them? If so I don't ...

Punctuation and grammar really isn't my thing, so I won't say anything on it. I like the poem, I like the title, and I love the meaning. It's so sad ...

Wow. Your poem blew my mind. :) I'm not really a fan of horror but I still good ideas for the stories. This sounds like something from R.L. Stine (did ...