Virgil

Thank you! I don't poet often so I dunno if I'm that good or nawt :D

You don't have to say thank you, you're the one pooping rainbows and writing perfection :D

Perfection.

“You know, Horry, there’s only so many times you can show a boy how to brew a decent cup of tea before you lose the will to live entirely,” snapped ...

Thanks for the review, this was only the first part of the chapter, and I feel ready good that this is really good to everything, even though I am 12. ...

Thanks, I was just trying it out for fun, I went off of the planets, and the universe, and it all being destroyed one day, that was kind of the ...

Thanks for the review, this was my first poem so I feel like this sucked.

It's quite alright friend :D.

Yeah, this was my first novel, or short story, ever, that i've finished, I'm not bothering to fix it anymore, it's done and over with, I feel that my other ...

Thank you, I'm fixing the pace at the moment, I forgot to put it in draft, there's more coming, I just figured out everytime there's a new talker, new paragraph ...

Thanks CaptainSalty, I knew my pacing was a bit fast, and I needed to hear it, the big space is a misclick, I know its fast, and I'm working to ...

i'm pretty sure, that spiritual and writing about your Religion is different,

Retro, you have to consider (s)he's also 11, this is probably the most skilled 11 year old I've ever seen at writing.

xD. I love the crazy vibe. It just rubs off on me and wants me to do something crazy, and I love the story it tells, how it ends is ...

Thanks for the review, I realized the grammar errors before, but I just didn't know how to fix them, hopefully I can write better in what I'm writing now, which ...