Virgil

Thanks! I'll go ahead and do that since I believe I read it when it first started but that's hazy right now since I'm sick, haha.

Oh, yeah, I didn't notice that part of the poem, haha. Thanks so much! c:

Oh, that makes a lot more sense. Is the child the same? I may not have picked up on that part and I don't know if I would have been ...

No problem, and yeah, you don't have to follow anything I say about flow sometimes because it was more of just something to consider. I must have also rushed over ...

1.) Ah, I figured it seemed something related to real life. I have not listened to John Denver, but I will try to when I'm able to so that I ...

Squeeeeeee that makes it even more exciting. I await your longer reply! c:

That does sound like a lot of fun! ^^

I'm not going to review this since Lumi said most of what I wanted to say, but I at first thought this title was 'literally love' and I don't know ...

I can see what you're talking about with the flow, but I don't know how I formatted the poem was being a problem in itself. I actually quite enjoy having ...

Thanks for the review. How I usually read my poetry is according to punctuation, and yeah, I write structured poetry, though it's rarely ever posted. I haven't delved into it ...

It does make a lot of sense and I think it works better in that way in this case!

I figured it was true since I knew you had moved and talked about that earlier in the pad, haha, I just didn't want to assume anything like if it ...

Thanks for the review!

o: I did not expect her to be that old in the story--and thanks so much for the clarification because I have an easy time getting the relationships between characters ...

huh. I didn't know about the heron symbolism, does the interpretation of the symbol of prosperity croaking america feel off to you? ;) Just a tad. :p Also, I'm glad ...