Virgil

This is Yams here for a review! I’m at the drinking fountain, leaning over and letting the cold water in my mouth. I stand up about to go up the ...

This is Yams here for a review! Let me first get on with the grammar issues-type of thing. There are no stanzas in this poem which you may have not ...

This is Yams here for probably a really really sucky review! I'd like to point out that I think if Seven wouldn't want to be dumped out of the side ...

This is Yams here for a review! The first thing I always like to mention to people who use titles like "Short piece" is to use a working title. A ...

This is Yams here for probably a really bad review! Okay, so I haven't been reading or read the other Tryal's Curse stuff except for the first few chapters, but ...

This is Yams here to tear your thing apart and am completely ignoring the reviews below so I can rip it to pieces every single way possible! You change your ...

This is Yams here for a review! The first thing I thought that this was actually just a writing blurb instead of a poem, the way it's formatted. Maybe you ...

This is Yams here for a review! My main problem with this is that it's a short story. And it doesn't really feel like a short story with a cliffhanger. ...

This is Yams here for a review! Okay, this was really hard on the eyes, first thing I noticed. There are things called paragraphs and they make it easier on ...

This is Yams here for a review! The rhyming in the first stanza actually doesn't feel that forced, but in the last stanza there isn't any rhyming and it kind ...

This is Yams here for a review! The first thing I have a problem with in the beginning, is that you jump right in. It's easy to say, "Who would ...

This is Yams here for a review! I have mixed feelings on this whole thing. Basically the whole short story is talking towards a person named Roth. And the way ...

This is Yams here for a review! The first thing I notice that needs work is the beginning, or at least I feel so. You're jumping straight in without explaining ...

Hey, this is Yams here for a review! So I'm going to be honest with you here, this poem wasn't, "The Best Thing Ever". I felt like the caps were ...

This is Yams here for a review! From the beginning I didn't know if I liked it, but I definitely know those buildings that people avoid because they're haunted. My ...