“Rose Quartz, the Pink Diamond,” Rose whispered to herself as she eyed her reflection in a mirror. “The new leader of Homeworld,” she continued, her voice faltering at the final word. She couldn’t imagine how White Diamond could’ve been shattered. She was never away from her quarters as of late. Nobody could figure out who did it. It certainly couldn’t have been the gems in the Geode system’s rebellions. The synthetically made Quartzes had proven to be more effective than whatever Charmelan’s defenses were.
Rose felt a bit of relief at that. It was only when the first of the Quartzes emerged that Cinnabar started using her weapons. The new Gems took care of that all too easily.
And now, the Earth was back to normal. She couldn’t remember how she reacted, but Blue was always throwing playful jokes at how she might as well have been an angry Tiger’s Eye.
Speaking of which… Where was that Gem? She got up from her bed and brushed her dress down. She leaned back, stretching to the side. Pearl was no-where to be seen. Probably in her quarters. Probably revelling in the fact that she even got her own room.
She pressed her left hand to the door, making it slide open. She stepped through it and pressed her hand once more on a pad outside of it. It closed again, pneumatics sealing the passage. She sighed and started walking. Windows passed by, showing off the Crystal System. She turned towards the control room. With a glance behind her, she noticed the ancient imprints in the ship’s carbonite floor, like they’d been walked on for a thousand years.
When she got to the control room, there were two gems, but not the ones she was expecting. Pearl and the Peridot she got to pilot her ship were heatedly debating over… something.
“Well if you ask me, I think you should keep your hands off the controls — Hey!” the Peridot shouted, using her robotic limbs to slap Pearl’s hands out of the way.
“You haven’t got them calibrated. Look. The entire ship is tilting to the right. You’ll never pull this thing to the System in time. At best, you’ll crash into Mars.” Pearl raised her brows and glared down at the green Gem.
“What do you know?” she growled before turning to Rose. “Oh! Pink Diamond!” She bent her knees into a rushed curtsy. “Your Pearl is meddling with the controls.”
Rose cast a glance at Pearl. Impressive, she was. She hid her smile and put on a false glare. “Pearl. To your quarters.”
Pearl nodded, pulling her short hair behind her ears. She cast a glare back at the Peridot before gliding down the floor. Rose ruffled the hair on her head before sending her on her way.
“Have you ever thought of that Pearl as… defective?” the deceptively tall gem said.
Rose stiffened. “Why would you ask?”
“She’s overzealous, even for a Pearl,” she said, reaching blindly for a tool at her left.
Rose bit her bottom lip, thinking of Pearl. “She might just be more intelligent from age. Six thousand years is a long time to have one.”
“Have you ever thought of having her harvested?” the gem asked, pulling her visor down as she grabbed the tool. “To get a better one?”
Rose’s eyes widened, but she straightened her face immediately. “Where’s Tiger’s Eye?” she asked, glancing around the control room.
“In her quarters,” the Peridot said, putting her hands into the controls. Lines of code reflected in her eyes. “I can’t exactly stop a massive Quartz from stalking off like well, a tiger.”
Rose blinked. Of course she couldn’t. Peridots probably couldn’t stop a brand-new Sapphire. Not that she’d say it in front of the Sapphire on the crew.
Rose glared, then turned around and left. She stalked down the halls, headed back the way she came. She passed the door to her room without even giving it a second glance. There Pearl was, giving away that she was defective. She was lucky that it was just a Peridot that noticed. If one of her fellow diamonds caught wind, then Pearl would be gone for good.
She stepped into a short corridor with two rooms on each side. It didn’t end in a dead end, but in a room with a fireplace and comfortable enough cushions on the floor. She glanced in there before seeing the escort gem. “Tiger’s Eye,” Rose said coldly. The gem turned around, her figure seemingly glowing in front of the firelight.
“Yes, Pink Diamond?” Her voice was smooth, for a Quartz at least. “Is something wrong?”
Rose narrowed her eyes and clenched her fists. How could she be so oblivious? “You know exactly what’s wrong. You’re here, lounging about, while your crewmate is left both piloting and doing mantenance?”
She glanced down at her feet then at Rose’s face. “I—”
“Just go, before I have you harvested.” Rose waited for Tiger’s Eye to pass by before following her out. She knocked on Pearl’s door, waiting for it to open.
It took a few minutes before she showed up, her clothes in perfect order. “Pink Diamond,” she said. “Come in!”
The door closed, and Pearl gave a sigh. “Thank the stars it’s only you,” she said, sitting down on a cushion. Her legs splayed out and she rested her arms on the pillow. “I thought it’d be that awful Peridot. That... Triangle-Head... is so…” She clenched her hand into a fist. “Sorry, Rose.”
“No, it’s alright,” Rose said, sitting down beside her. She found herself sitting on her pink hair. “But you need to be more careful. That Peridot thinks you’re defective.” When she saw Pearl’s shoulders tighten, Rose grinned and leaned in next to her. “I told her that you’re just getting smart with age.”
Pearl sighed and leaned back on the cushion. “I guess I should…”
Rose nodded. “It’s alright. This is Earth we’re headed to, not Homeworld. There aren’t many civilized Gems on the colony. That’s why the others are sending me this way. So I can lead securely.”
Pearl heaved a sigh. “They probably still have Pearls on Earth. I’ll still have to be… that.”
“They’ve got humans on Earth, Pearl. Remember the creatures I actually wanted to lose my title over?” She laughed, and she saw Pearl crack a faint smile.
“Yeah,” she said wistfully.
“And on Earth, even the Pearls can have humans.” Rose didn’t know this, but she wanted to alleviate at least some of Pearl’s anxiety.
At that, Pearl sat up. She blinked and then turned to Rose. “I… don’t know how to…”
Rose laughed. “Act like that around other Gems. They’d never think you’re above average.”
“No, really.”
Rose stared, her cheeks curling upwards. She planted a kiss on Pearl’s gem. “Well, you have to feed them, water them, and let them grow.”
“Like one of your plants, huh?” Pearl said, rubbing the gem on her forehead tenderly.
“Exactly like that.”
Pearl laughed nervously. “It’s probably not that simple.”
“Oh, but it is.” Rose stood up and grabbed Pearl’s hand. Pearl got to her feet and stared into Rose’s eyes. Rose stared back, her eyes shining. “If you can take care of that Peridot back there, then I’m sure a human isn’t a hassle.”
She backed away, hand still extended. “Come with me, Pearl. And try being yourself as we go out.”
“But the other gems…”
“The Sapphire’s not anywhere around here and the others are all in the control room.” She grabbed Pearl’s hand and pulled her closer. “Come on, let’s try it.”
Pearl flushed, her cheeks turning blue. “Alright.” She strode down the halls, faster than Rose. She glanced about the halls, her eyes flickering about. Rose watched her glance up and down at the slits between metal, how she paused and narrowed her eyes.
“They could certainly find something to patch up these cracks,” she whispered. She stood up on her toes, tracing her fingers along a crack in the ceiling. “The vacuum of space can only make them bigger. Then the ship’ll get destroyed…”
Rose found herself getting more and more amused by Pearl’s investigations. At least, until she caught Pearl giving a backwards glance at her, like she was checking to see if Rose was happy with the way she was acting. Rose’s heart sunk a bit, her smile fading.
“Pearl, look,” she said, stopping at a window on the outer side of the hall. Earth was coming towards them at a rapid pace. “Earth’s a safe place, a haven perhaps. You’ll be safe, I’ll be safe, and I wouldn’t let them harvest you, even if you are defective. Just relax.”
Pearl stared at Rose, giving an owlish blink. She nodded and stared down at her feet. “I understand…” She looked around, and her shoulders loosened. Still, she said, “Pink Diamond.”
Rose inched closer to Pearl. “We’ll be alright. Just you wait.” She paused a second. “Just you wait.”
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Steven Universe is my favorite show, and I'm picky about fanfictions for it, so sorry if this comes off as harsh!

So, this was probably written before Earthlings/Back to the Moon/Bubbled, which disproved the Rose is Pink Diamond theory...but hey, I bought into/liked that theory too, so I'll ignore that.
I liked that you showed the relationships between characters as they are on the show. It was all consistent with canon, from Pearls being slaves to Peridots not being made for fighting, but for tech...
I can only think of one thing: I'm confused as to the actual situation. Was this before Rose rebelled, or is it an alternate timeline where she never rebels? Or something else? Sorry, maybe I'm just not a careful reader.
I just love this fanfiction, okay?
Aaah, thanks for the review! I just wanted to say that this chapter was written before even the StevenBomb in January, so this story still relied on the Rose is Pink Diamond and Lapis is Blue Diamond. And yes, this is an alternate timeline where Rose decided not to rebel.
Again, thanks for the review!
Hello again!
Nice details and description here - sections like this are really good!Specifics
1. The beginning of this chapter feels like a huge time skip! Maybe you could lead us into it more gently with a little more description of Rose's emotional state and hints that time has passed and that things have happened. Then lead into this being one of those things?
2. It seems a bit odd that Rose can't remember how she reacted during the battle. Things could be a blur or she could feel like she did nothing to help, like she froze up, but it's too total to say she just doesn't remember.
3. I'm not sure how Tiger's Eye gets us to Pearl? I think it's difficult for people coming into this who don't understand the connections between the different gems and while you don't want to re-tell too much in a fan-fic, you do need to establish the rules of the universe and some basic world building. A fan-fic should make us want to discover the original; it should be intriguing and unique and cover enough to also stand on its own.
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5. I'm not sure I understand this line of dialogue - to have one what? A life? Or is Rose referring to her having had the Pearl for that long?
6. This is a nice part but I think you could expand more on how Rose feels about this. How concerned is she for the Pearl? Does she know her own mind on the matter or is she still trying to decide if she thinks that it's okay for the Pearl to be different?
7. I think this is a very key moment and well handled! The story flows much more smoothly in the last third and the characters start to take on depth. I think the beginning still needs work - it's a little rushed perhaps.
Overall
The dialogue is your strongest element in this while your description generally needs the most work. I know they're on a ship now but I don't know very much about the ship and I'm still trying to get to grips with who the crew are and how the gem system works. I'm guessing the characters are humanoid but I'm not entirely sure.
I hope this gives you a few things to think about!
Keep writing!
~Heather
This is Yams here for a review!
The first thing I have a problem with in the beginning, is that you jump right in. It's easy to say, "Who would read fanfic if they haven't watched the show?" but without much even trying to explain you just go right into it thinking all readers will understand what's going on. I know what's going on, sure, but others might not. So try and introduce the characters in a different way I suggest.
I feel like this is much more serious than Steven Universe actually is-- but I won't complain. Just know what you're getting into when you change the tone, and if you don't know that it feels a lot different than the Steven Universe style, now you do. It feels like you're trying to make a cartoon into something way more serious, and before Steven existed, I'm sure it was less comedy.
Character Review:
Rose: You kept her dialogue as it should be, but it feels like I can't tell her apart from Pearl a bit, or they just mix in. It feels like you're trying to do the same character for both of them.
Pearl: I like how you portrayed her unsureness in this. It's kind of one of the only things that makes me know without looking at the name that it's her.
Overall, I didn't have much to say on this. My brain is quite foggy right now, so I'm just going to say, have a great day!