Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review! What do I do with you now? Your cackles too loud and your shackles too loose. Your dreams have started to leak through. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! We gotta talk about things that used to be good But this ain't workin' out the way we thought it would This ain't ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I look up at the Sky its beauty shining in my eyes, before they flit back to the paper stark white against the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I got so mad, for no reason. I made you mad and I hurt you. I wanted to punish you for hurting me. ...

This is Kaos here for a review. I didn't know if the top part before the poem starts was supposed to explain what's going on, or was like a thing ...

This is Kaos here for a review. i'm just here for your entertainment, your fun. i also know that i'm not the only one. you toy with many, play with ...

This is Kaos here for a review. Past -- has it's influences over us All the time. It sometimes controls our present, It can cause you fear, pain, and tears ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Do you remember being three years old, folding up paper and cutting out people, each one being connected to the next, a never-ending ...

This is Kaos here for a review. The first thing I noticed in this poem is the insane amount of ellipses you use. It really degrades the quality of the ...

This is Kaos here for a review. I felt like the message was distorted by the tone you chose to write the poem in. Using words like "nincompoop" in the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! My first problem with the poem is that the rhyming restricts the rest of the poem in a negative manner. It feels forced ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I didn't like the amount of "we" or the "we" in general in this poem. It gives off the wrong vibe like you're ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The start of the poem feels awkward as the reader doesn't really have any context to go off of. We can already tell ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The story starts off with little explanation with what's going on, which is fine if you do it in moderation, but it feels ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I like the concept of the story, but the execution is weaker. The pace of it seems too quick and that you should ...