Virgil

This is Kaos here for a shorter review for a shorter poem! You did a lot of listing off emotions again in this poem, which annoyed me. Instead of listing ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Aight Try this out Lemme know how it goes One last verse before I end the show I don't need a beat or ...

This is Kaos here for a review! This is a rather slow-paced chapter by its nature. I like the pacing of this chapter as it doesn't really rush anything, but ...

This is Kaos here for a review. I felt like there was an excess of ellipses and exclamation marks, though I may be a little biased as I hate all ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I am one to believe that you can have characters that are realistic while being a fantasy setting. This doesn't show here. The ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The stealth jet whizzed across the landscape while inside, Katelyn practiced her powers, shooting blasts of energy at targets, while thinking about her ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Solex decided to go out and get some fresh air. Curious, she walked towards the inhabitant's area. As she walked down the path, ...

This is Kaos here for a review! “Wakey wakey.” Everything was blurry. Finch tried to open her eyes, screwed them tight, then opened them again. There was a cold floor ...

This is Kaos here for a review! we used to walk through blades of grass, cutting everything in our paths - we used to try to touch the sky pitch ...

This is Kaos here for a review! We’re driving too fast Flying with the pine trees that line the road And the stars Pushing eighty On an empty asphalt plane ...

This is Kaos here for a review! There's a hall I once walked-- and inside, people I still know; although my feet won't tread its floors again I still walk ...

This is Kaos here for a review. As TheOneNamedZoe said, don't try and hide this under poetry when it feels so heavily influenced by rap. I'm not saying that rap ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I enjoyed the concepts of this poem, though my overall feelings for it was that it was wasted potential. There were some more ...

This is Kaos here for a review! this body is not made of toxic sludge; there are no pounds of rotting food tucked away inside this gut. these metabolic processes ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Darling, you’re bad poetry-- You’re no tortured soul at heart. You’re sloppy, bland, too odd to find-- Too different to be art. This ...