Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review! So I actually liked the concept of the poem and the atmosphere you were trying to create, and that's what I want to ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I want to bring up is that this is topic based, and that's something that's usually not beneficial, at ...

This is Kaos here for a review. So this is a poem that's wrapped up in itself with the fact that it's more of a ramble than anything else because ...

This is Kaos here for a review! he approaches, feathers for hair eyes like dark pools of midnight dancing with fury, and an inner light, shining like the midday sun. ...

This is Kaos here for a review, as promised. So this poem tells more of a story that isn't based on experience, at least from what I see here. How ...

This is Kaos here for a review! i have read in books about heartbreak, and i have always imagined it to be some sort of nebulous warfare, a crashing, a ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I couldn't get emotionally invested into this because it doesn't use poetic devices, lacks them, even. The rhyming is elementary and I don't ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I see you're new to YWS, so I welcome you! I'm interested in your style and how you write, which is what happened ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So you tell this story with an allegory, and I have mixed feelings on it. From the start of the poem I already ...

This is Kaos here for a review! continues to burn, or we are like ghosts caught behind a window's reflection. This was an interesting way to start the poem, and ...

This is Kaos here for a review. So you went for something else here. That's probably the first thing that I noticed and I encourage you to keep writing about ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed was your vocabulary, which seems awfully opened up to more advance words and I'm not saying that ...

This is Kaos here for a review! i've seen the blue fire erupt into azure flames, warm and high. why're you the oxygen? One of the first things that I ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The poem didn't really get anywhere for me, it recycled the same thing for too long. The idea of a life being a ...

This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! the pokestops in my city are already out of date, bus stops hundreds of feet away and stores long closed, landmarks ...