Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review! So this is an interesting concept for a poem, but I didn't really think it fit /being/ a poem? It didn't really feel ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Touching this since nobody else has yet, and it's probably because of the monster length of the poem that you have here. It's ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Wanted to make a small note before I started reviewing the poem is that you don't have to explain the title or the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So this poem didn't really do anything other than describe physical romance, which didn't really mix with me that well because that's the ...

This is Kaos here for another review! So this follows a 4x4 format again, like your last poem. I didn't really find this anything special and the structure of the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The lax style is the first thing that I noticed that still followed from the last draft, which is something that I want ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So the first thing that I noticed in this poem was the rhyme that was faintly in the poem. It didn't really do ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I also, like Lumi, felt there was a lot of missed potential. I'll explain that my reasons for that. When I read this, ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed about this is the grammar and the structure, which is something that I wanted to touch on. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So the first three lines were actually something that interested me and set-up with a good set of images, which could have been ...

This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! So this poem interested me in the fact that it uses a lot of dialogue, which is something we don't really ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So the imagery in this poem is something that jumped around a little from words to keychains to building blocks and I wanted ...

This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem with this is that it doesn't do anything new. It doesn't even really try to do anything new. It's the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I enjoyed the first stanza with the imagery that you give and I wanted more of that with the rain seeping into the ...

This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! The first thing that I noticed is that your lines tend to drag on a long time and you don't end ...