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Virgil

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: dawn

    This is Kaos here for a review! So let's tackle this poem. The wording is something that I enjoyed, with it being strong and it working well with the flow. ...

    Dec 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Deleted 74

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! So the first stanza that you have here is nice, but I wondered about the comparison between the bohemian and the ...

    Dec 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Haiku 24

    This is Kaos here for a rather short review for a rather short poem. So I didn't hate this haiku and thought it had potential with the first line. Of ...

    Dec 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ocean

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this poem is interesting and I clicked because 1.) the title 'ocean' and I like to see the usage of sea/ocean imagery ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: They Don't Speak For Us

    This is Kaos here for a review! So the first thoughts that I had about this poem was that it was alright and that it does have a valuable theme ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: like steppingstones.

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this is a poem that interested me because I feel like you took a look or way back into your older style. ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Rain Is Laughing at Me

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! So the first thing that I noticed about this poem is that it lacks neatness. The structure is something that you ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: withershins

    Is it bad that I clicked on this because I thought it said 'widdershins'? Let's jump into the review. The way that you broke up the stanzas was interesting with ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wax lit streetlights

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! So this is shorter than your usual which is something that interested me. I liked the structure of this poem as ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: how was your day?

    This is Kaos here for a review! An interesting choice for the title of the poem and it does good at drawing in the reader. More specifically, it's why I ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: pneu-mon-ia.

    This is Kaos here for a review! You've done it again. I had trouble reviewing this because it pains me to do it because of it being good. The first ...

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: A Day on The Playground

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! The main problem that I noticed with this is that the first half of it tends to do a lot of ...

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: He Won't Speak to Me Anymore

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this is pleasantly not at all what I thought it was going to be. I myself don't believe in any religion but ...

    Dec 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Wish (Wicked pt. 2)

    This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed about this poem was the rhyme that was going on. It didn't really do anything special but ...

    Dec 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vitamins & Desultory Guitars

    This is Kaos here for a review! This is a cute little poem, but it doesn't really delve deeper than that. I think that's all it's really meant to be ...

    Dec 16, 2016


Monster is a relative term. To a canary, a cat is a monster. We're just used to being the cat.
— Henry Wu, "Jurassic World"