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Virgil

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: dawn

    This is Kaos here for a review! So let's tackle this poem. The wording is something that I enjoyed, with it being strong and it working well with the flow. ...

    Dec 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Deleted 74

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! So the first stanza that you have here is nice, but I wondered about the comparison between the bohemian and the ...

    Dec 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Haiku 24

    This is Kaos here for a rather short review for a rather short poem. So I didn't hate this haiku and thought it had potential with the first line. Of ...

    Dec 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ocean

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this poem is interesting and I clicked because 1.) the title 'ocean' and I like to see the usage of sea/ocean imagery ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: They Don't Speak For Us

    This is Kaos here for a review! So the first thoughts that I had about this poem was that it was alright and that it does have a valuable theme ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: like steppingstones.

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this is a poem that interested me because I feel like you took a look or way back into your older style. ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Rain Is Laughing at Me

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! So the first thing that I noticed about this poem is that it lacks neatness. The structure is something that you ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: withershins

    Is it bad that I clicked on this because I thought it said 'widdershins'? Let's jump into the review. The way that you broke up the stanzas was interesting with ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wax lit streetlights

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! So this is shorter than your usual which is something that interested me. I liked the structure of this poem as ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: how was your day?

    This is Kaos here for a review! An interesting choice for the title of the poem and it does good at drawing in the reader. More specifically, it's why I ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: pneu-mon-ia.

    This is Kaos here for a review! You've done it again. I had trouble reviewing this because it pains me to do it because of it being good. The first ...

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: A Day on The Playground

    This is Kaos here for a review, as promised! The main problem that I noticed with this is that the first half of it tends to do a lot of ...

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: He Won't Speak to Me Anymore

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this is pleasantly not at all what I thought it was going to be. I myself don't believe in any religion but ...

    Dec 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Wish (Wicked pt. 2)

    This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed about this poem was the rhyme that was going on. It didn't really do anything special but ...

    Dec 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vitamins & Desultory Guitars

    This is Kaos here for a review! This is a cute little poem, but it doesn't really delve deeper than that. I think that's all it's really meant to be ...

    Dec 16, 2016


Follow your passion. Stay true to yourself. Never follow someone else's path unless you're in the woods and you're lost and you see a path. By all means, you should follow that.
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