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Re: Our Own World
This is Nikayla here for a review! More prose poetry from you, which is interesting. I think that it qualifies best as prose poetry rather than flash fiction since there ...
Jan 18, 2017 -
Re: Still not beautiful
This is Nikayla here for a review! Jumping right into it with a review as promised, it didn't seem that your teacher gave you any set structure to work with ...
Jan 18, 2017 -
Re: A different sort of love letter.
This is Nikayla here for a review! So this was an interesting perspective for a love or romance related poem. I always find it interesting when the speaker is something ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: hello tuesday
This is Nikayla here for a review! I actually quite liked the tone you set up with this poem, and while the imagery is quite pretty, the subject matter is ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: 2 0 1 7 | and they will turn her into anarkali
This is Nikayla here for a review. I wasn't really fond of the title all that much and the poem didn't appeal to me as much as your other poems, ...
Jan 16, 2017 -
Re: Mid Term Exams
This is Nikayla here for a review! Okay, I'm going to tackle this because I absolutely loved this poem. I've never read your poetry before but this was a pleasant ...
Jan 14, 2017 -
Re: Kayla
This is Nikayla here for a review, so let's jump right into it. The first thing I noticed that I just wanted to point out is that you have a ...
Jan 13, 2017 -
Re: she.
This is Nikayla here to tackle this poem! So this is something that deviates a bit from your usual style is like, and I'm not saying that I hate it ...
Jan 12, 2017 -
Re: untitled fragment
This is Nikayla here to tackle this for a review! So this was quite interesting when it comes to having thought. There's not really much of a topic for the ...
Jan 11, 2017 -
Re: an ode to the rebel of ages past and future
Why not, time to jump right into this review! I see you play with white space which is something that interests me here. It's something that you use to your ...
Jan 10, 2017 -
Re: fragments of us left in january
This is Kaos here for a review! I'm going to be leaving some notes with this, so let's jump right into that. In the first stanza, it didn't really feel ...
Jan 6, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 75
This is Kaos here for a review! So as this is your first poem of 2017, I may as well review it. It's also because I don't have any background ...
Jan 4, 2017 -
Re: Twerk (A Poem From A Rapper's Point of View)
This is Kaos here for a review on FRIDAY MORNING. Honestly at first I thought that this was a set of lyrics due to the masterpiece that you have here, ...
Jan 1, 2017 -
Re: Lost In Me
This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed about this is that the poem tends to ramble on about some things rather than showing us ...
Dec 31, 2016 -
Re: the root of [???] is less than or equal to the source
This is Kaos here for a review! So I love it when there are short things that contain punchlines. I say it a lot that I hate it when poetry ...
Dec 31, 2016