Hello! LadyShadows here to review this piece!
I have read and reviewed some other works of yours, and I can safely say I've become a fan! However I have to sadly say that this may be a weaker work of yours. You did a good job, but it lacked the drama and darkness that I noticed your other works have. To me it did not flow too well and the whole poem kind of contradicted its own self. And to me the poem rambled on and did not get to the point like your other works have done. To me this did not have good metaphors in it as well and it sounded like a rant in one way or another. This could be me and my thoughts, but nonetheless please do not take what I am saying seriously. I am not being rude, but merely want you to improve. You have terrific poetry! Keep writing! I want to see more
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