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Virgil

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: A tanka for one poem (14/1/2017)

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I found two things a little odd before I jump into the actual content of the review. I get that the two poems ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Art » Satire, Humor Re: My Inspirational Manifesto

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So I wanted to review this to prove that I could review art :p. But really, I thought this was an interesting piece ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mermaid

    This is Nikayla here for a review! Let me tell you now that I enjoyed this poem so I won't be gushing for the rest of the review. Aside from ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: in your absence

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I don't think I've ever happened to tackle your poetry before, so let's jump right into the review. So there's not really a ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: early morning thoughts

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I don't think I've ever reviewed a poem from you, at least I don't think I have. What's weird is that you didn't ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: the day i spoke my mind

    This is Nikayla here for a review. I think that the start to this poem is something that could be stronger by using more imagery about the sweaty palms and ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Melt - 1.3 - Falling Girls

    This is Nikayla here for another review! I'm excited to review this chapter, so let's jump right into it. Last time we left off with the chapter ending after Lilli ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Awful or Awesome?

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So this is an interesting way to form a poem--off of a play on words. Nonetheless, let's jump further into what you have ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: imagination

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I'm not one who's too knowledgeable when it comes to things like meter, but I think it works well for this poem. Originally ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Where My Heart Lies

    This is Nikayla here for a short review! The first thing that I noticed about this is that it happens to be three lines long. I think the subject matter ...

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Mouldy Fruit

    This is Nikayla here for a review! I actually think this poem has a lot of potential due to its unique idea. I don't think anyone's ever really tackled writing ...

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Melt - 1.2 - Falling Girls

    This is Nikayla, jumping right in for another review! I don't know if I just now noticed this or that it wasn't in the first chapter, but we learn that ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Heart is in the Future

    This is Nikayla here for a review! One of the first things that I have to say about this poem, is that it lacked substance. This is a short poem ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Makes Her Beautiful

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So this is an interesting poem in the fact that it focuses on someone's considered-to-be-flaws which we find out later in the poem ...

    Jan 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: if these eyes could speak

    This is Nikayla here for a review! So this is an interesting formatting for a piece. It lacks substance to review, and that in itself is part of the critique ...

    Jan 23, 2017


I will not allow my life's light to be determined by the darkness around me.
— Sojourner Truth