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Re: A tanka for one poem (14/1/2017)
This is Nikayla here for a review! I found two things a little odd before I jump into the actual content of the review. I get that the two poems ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: My Inspirational Manifesto
This is Nikayla here for a review! So I wanted to review this to prove that I could review art :p. But really, I thought this was an interesting piece ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Mermaid
This is Nikayla here for a review! Let me tell you now that I enjoyed this poem so I won't be gushing for the rest of the review. Aside from ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: in your absence
This is Nikayla here for a review! I don't think I've ever happened to tackle your poetry before, so let's jump right into the review. So there's not really a ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: early morning thoughts
This is Nikayla here for a review! I don't think I've ever reviewed a poem from you, at least I don't think I have. What's weird is that you didn't ...
Jan 27, 2017 -
Re: the day i spoke my mind
This is Nikayla here for a review. I think that the start to this poem is something that could be stronger by using more imagery about the sweaty palms and ...
Jan 27, 2017 -
Re: Melt - 1.3 - Falling Girls
This is Nikayla here for another review! I'm excited to review this chapter, so let's jump right into it. Last time we left off with the chapter ending after Lilli ...
Jan 26, 2017 -
Re: Awful or Awesome?
This is Nikayla here for a review! So this is an interesting way to form a poem--off of a play on words. Nonetheless, let's jump further into what you have ...
Jan 26, 2017 -
Re: imagination
This is Nikayla here for a review! I'm not one who's too knowledgeable when it comes to things like meter, but I think it works well for this poem. Originally ...
Jan 26, 2017 -
Re: Where My Heart Lies
This is Nikayla here for a short review! The first thing that I noticed about this is that it happens to be three lines long. I think the subject matter ...
Jan 25, 2017 -
Re: Mouldy Fruit
This is Nikayla here for a review! I actually think this poem has a lot of potential due to its unique idea. I don't think anyone's ever really tackled writing ...
Jan 25, 2017 -
Re: Melt - 1.2 - Falling Girls
This is Nikayla, jumping right in for another review! I don't know if I just now noticed this or that it wasn't in the first chapter, but we learn that ...
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: My Heart is in the Future
This is Nikayla here for a review! One of the first things that I have to say about this poem, is that it lacked substance. This is a short poem ...
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: It Makes Her Beautiful
This is Nikayla here for a review! So this is an interesting poem in the fact that it focuses on someone's considered-to-be-flaws which we find out later in the poem ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: if these eyes could speak
This is Nikayla here for a review! So this is an interesting formatting for a piece. It lacks substance to review, and that in itself is part of the critique ...
Jan 23, 2017
