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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 6.1
Hi there, BlueAfrica! Member of the Afterwatch urgently jumping in so that the Green Room doesn't make it to fifteen. So I found this novel chapter to be more on ...
May 6, 2017 -
Re: snooze anthem of the 90s.
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So this is different from your usual style, yet it fits, since it's the kind of joke that I'd expect from ...
May 6, 2017 -
Re: The Selection Series
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I agree that this could be placed better, such as the Media Reviews forum where you can talk with other ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Butterfly
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a short review on a short poem! So I see that you're new to the site, and I welcome you! The first aspect ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: Afraid
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So this is interesting at the very least, though I do believe that it could use some work. We'll first start ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: Ten Gallon Tank
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. I'm almost certain that this is a set structure, and if so, what is it? If not, it sure seems as ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: Yew
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a short review on a short poem! I see that you're new to the site, so I first welcome you! Though, that's not ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: Imagery isn't my strong suit.
This is Nikayla here for a review! So I'd like to say that while imagery may not be your strong suit, structure is. I enjoyed the structure and overall aesthetic ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: The Angkor Monolith (Part 1/3)
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I don't believe that I've reviewed you before, or at least, if I have it hasn't been for awhile. Let's ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: The nightly questions
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So you haven't posted poetry in awhile. May as well jump on this one while it's still in the Green Room. ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: Drowning
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I'm mixed on this piece, we can get that much out of the way already. While I enjoy some of ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: dances in the dark
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I see that you're quite new to the site, so I welcome you! Putting that aside, let's jump right into the ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: Writer's Block (Edited)
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I thought this short story and its concept turned out to be pretty clever. The execution of the end is ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: hacker, dearest
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Well, now I'm interested as to what the assignment given for your class actually was. I have to agree with Hannah ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 1
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Your first actual line that describes Paris and gives the reader some background gives a nice start to the story, but ...
May 2, 2017
