Oh wow. This is...incredible. I have never been able to put how my depression feels into a piece of writing, but you captured it perfectly. Your word choice was incredible. The only thing I can see is in the 15th (?) line, where you say "I am going deeper till..." there should be an apostrophe before "till," since it is a shorter way to say "until." Other than thay, beautiful, beautiful job!
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