Virgil

Atsmai here for a review! I don't know who Ezekiel is because I don't read the Bible but nonetheless. The Ohs and Tos like ChocolateCello said below are overkill yeah. ...

Atsmai here on review day! I'm jumping in without reading the other chapters since I have nothing else to review but here we go! The first problem I have is ...

Atsmai here for a review. You have quite a style to your writing but I feel like you may be trying to overdo it a bit. Your descriptions and style ...

This is Atsmai here for a review! However much satire you made it to be I thought of this on an emotional level so let's begin with this review. I ...

Okay, Atsmai here for a review. The topic is interesting. I think I'll review this by paragraph: What's wrong with me? Maybe I am a hypocrite. I laughed at the ...

Alright, Ats here for a review. I like the idea, but it could be something other than "Tear-strained cheeks" because tears don't stay on cheeks, but I got the idea. ...

Okay, Atsmai here for a review! First off, I really like your descriptions, they feel packed and I can imagine what's going on, very precise, I like that. From the ...

Alright, Atsmai here to review for ya! First off, I don't like how you use Helen Keller as an example, as it's kind of weak. Yes, she was deaf and ...

So, I'm here to review this, Atsmai here. So, from the beginning, I feel like this is horror for some sort of reason, and, I figure the name is from ...

I like the prologue is in letters, it's very short and sweet to begin the story, anyone can pick it up and read the prologue easily, I like that, people ...

Here we go, this is Atsmai here for a review because it's review day! I didn't really like the start, but I did like the descriptions in the start, the ...

All right, this is Atsmai here and I'm going to do a line by line, or 2 line by 2 line review. a series of events put together This kinds ...

Ah, I loved the beginning and the flashback Pyrok had. I wonder if she's Goku/Superman type, sent down from space disgused as a human, I love the way Pyrok thinks ...

Alright, I'm back again for another review. I really liked this chapter compared to the first. I always love my melancholic groaning in stories. No, but really, I liked when ...

I like how short and different your prologue is, leaving us to jump right into the chapter. I like your descriptions, but I don't like your dialogue much. It sounds ...