VioletFantasy

Hello! VioletFantasy here to review this very powerful poem. I think you did a wonderful job! I love all of the imagery you used, especially in this stanza: “Come. Steal ...

Hello! VioletFantasy here to do a review. This short story was very enjoyable! Tessa is an adorably quirky protagonist that I immediately fell in love with. I always find it ...

Hello @ScarlettFire! VioletFantasy here to review your new lyrics. Everything you wrote is so true!! It does feel like the world is ending with quarantine. I thought global warming or ...

Hello! Again, I am over a decade late on this review, but I hope it can still help! I really liked this story. I have recently gotten into the horror ...

Hello @jodo! Welcome to YWS! If you ever have any questions about the website, feel free to P.M me. Now, onto the review. This poem was beautiful and very relatable. ...

Hello @mim! I may be 15 years late, but I would still love to review this thrilling story. I love how it really describes human beings. Humans are never completely ...

Greetings! I’m VioletFantasy and I’m here to review this sweet little poem you wrote. First of all, I absolutely love how you started each stanza with the word “someday”. It ...

Hello @imaginer2018! Wow!!! This is such an amazing story. I was so enthralled by the plot and the characters. I love it when characters dream about something that is actually ...

Greetings! I’m VioletFantasy and I would love to review this sweet poem that you wrote. I can really relate to this. I have always hated the last day of school ...

Hello @Magebird! I’m not a very experienced reviewer, but I’ll try my best to give you some helpful feedback. First off, I really like this story! The plot is very ...

Hello @JesseWrites! I’m here to review your poem. This poem is something all writers can relate to. It shows the hope that comes with writing something new and the disappointment ...

Hello @IamI! This poem is beautiful! Well, in a dystopian kind of way. You painted a picture of a man-made world full of doom and lacking hope. “ It is ...

Hi @Shadeflame! VioletFantasy here to review your poem. I think we are on the same page when it comes to space. It’s cool and all, but I don’t plan on ...

Hey @TheMessenger15! I’m here to review your poem. I really like all of the imagery you used throughout it, like “ The winds howl fiercely in the night, the echoes ...

Hey @SparkySweet! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I really like these song lyrics! They are so catchy and I even caught myself making up a fake tune to ...