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Re: Insensible
@emmals16, @musicandme, @Aley: Wow guys! Thanks for those reviews and suggestions. I really appreciate what you did. I wish I could do just what you want me to but I ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Truth by design
Aw. Well, I do believe He's real, it's just that people choose not to believe. And yes, we do have our choices, and each one is different from the other.God ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: The Rise of the Fallen: Prologue
You are indeed a good writer. I was sort of thinking what the kingdom be called like and ended up with confusing and funny names, so I then stopped. Nyaha! ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Insensible
Well, this is sort of a duplicate of the other insensibly titled poem because the internet connection in our realm seemed to have gone "turbo"! So just feel free to ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: The Warrior
Forgive me for this but I kinda used your work in my class.
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: In Silence...
Thanks there slayer. Well, does it sound like it? 'cause I'm not really a fan (no offense if you are though). It's just one of my out-of-being-overwhelmed works. I don't ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: In Silence...
Thanks fire. Looking forward for your work too.
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: In Silence...
I'll do, I'll find time.
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: In Silence...
Well thanks love. Yeah "their" is an overlooked mistake there. The ellipsis are placed on purpose. It's supposed to be the continuation of the title so it will be read ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: In Silence...
Thanks Meredith. I need to fix something though ;)
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: In Silence...
Wow thanks Yastika02! ;) Well, I really didn't noticed the "their" and "findan" there. Please do forgive my mistake for that. I sort of did not mind to review my ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Live, Love, Learn
It's nothing. I just love good literary works.
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Delete
i love the transition here... from asking to let others decide whether to let you go no matter how you asked. to realizing that everything only depends on you. it's ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Monotony
i personally liked the use of punctuation marks... they just seem to mean something deeper than what's there to read... i loved what you made... i see myself in the ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: After all..
there is a very strong feeling here... seem to be that survival is far at hand... so captivating, deep and gray... there is unity of thought from beginning to end... ...
Nov 16, 2014
