Veritas

Speechless. I have nothing to saw but you just changed my life.

Great chapter! I thought it was funny that on the main page I saw "The Definition of Hell" next to a Spongebob avatar XD

This is brilliant and completely true. This are the characteristics of a cowards and put so elegantly on paper! It's pure genius. Nice format, nice wording, great overall! Veritas

Interesting...perfect Ebonics.

BRAVO! Let me say that was one of the best things I've read recently. Your rhyme was incredible and your language was perfect and strong. I never thought someone could ...

Okay...give me a moment to get over how amazing that was... Okay, still not over it but I can talk now XD. That really was great and I can totally ...

Go to North Korea. Go to China. Go to Kenya. Got to Germany- Heil Hitler!!!!!!!!!! Nah... Just stay here, in the land of the free and the home of the ...

It's amazing prose, to be sure! Great detail and very nice language. The words you chose were a nice breath of fresh from the usual poems I read here. It ...

A bit rough but well-worded and interesting. Great job :)

Very simple, very touching. I think that is the story of many peoples lives and you captured it on a whim. Great job!

Reminds me of middle school!!!!! Lol acrostic is amazing! People look down on it because it's so simple but I like it! Sometimes short and simple is the best. YWS ...

The detail and feel of this poem is really impressive and I love it! I agree with tgirly about the third verse. Other than that I really have nothing to ...

This is very good! The simplicity makes it all the more powerful. Kudos!

Awww...I wish all sisters could be as close as this! Lovely poem, you capture the emotion well :)

This poem is great Short and sweet and to the point Haiku's are the bomb!