Veritas

That one gave me chills. That was terribly well written. So well that I almost wish I hadn't read it. You're very talented at writing this dark kind of thing. ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! You're going to love it here if you love to write! I like the poem you've got here and I agree completely. One thing though, you ...

This fell a bit short of my expectations after reading Ace of Thieves but it was still good in its own way. From the words of a monster i caps ...

This actually a very impressive piece your metaphors are top notch and consistent which is excellent. Choosing to continue the metaphor all the way through definitely added to the brilliant ...

For some reason this felt like a rap to me. Not that that's a bad thing at all. I tried it. It failed. I can't rap for my life :P ...

Well you definitely kept me going! This was one of those poems when i felt like the sound around me was muffled and the only thing that existed was me ...

This is very good! The emotion here is raw, undefined, and powerful and that's a great style of writing. My friend seems to be going through the same thing. Self-pity ...

....That' the best piece of poetry I've seen in a very, and I mean a very long time. Wow, I can't even breath lliterally! This needs to be somewhere, in ...

At long last, a brave soul to utter the name of God! I applaud you :D Now, to the review! My God, why have You forsaken me? Good first verse. ...

Hey there, squirt! This is a nice and simple poem. It's nice the way it is and still it could better. Poetry is about emotion (or lack of depending on ...

You've definitely earned a "like" for this one! This is very beautiful and i didn't find it as bad and repetitive as you said. This is amazing and even more ...

First of all, let me say welcome to YWS! You're going to love it here and just by reading this poem I can tell that you're going to be a ...

I'm actually very impressed with this. I had to get up and drink some lemonade because you made me so thirsty! This is so very realistic and it reminded me ...

I agree with Nafe on most of her points. This poem either needs to be heartfelt or funny and entertaining. You fell into a grey area. I wasn't sure if ...

Hmmm...this is very good and made me think. We humans are so....cocky. we think that we're have such control over everything like its our decision that matter. Yeah, right. One ...