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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Hide and Seek

    That one gave me chills. That was terribly well written. So well that I almost wish I hadn't read it. You're very talented at writing this dark kind of thing. ...

    Aug 26, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: god

    Hey, welcome to YWS! You're going to love it here if you love to write! I like the poem you've got here and I agree completely. One thing though, you ...

    Aug 26, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: unspoken

    This fell a bit short of my expectations after reading Ace of Thieves but it was still good in its own way. From the words of a monster i caps ...

    Jul 20, 2011

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: ace of theives

    This actually a very impressive piece your metaphors are top notch and consistent which is excellent. Choosing to continue the metaphor all the way through definitely added to the brilliant ...

    Jul 19, 2011

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Backseat.

    For some reason this felt like a rap to me. Not that that's a bad thing at all. I tried it. It failed. I can't rap for my life :P ...

    Jul 11, 2011

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Creature of Night

    Well you definitely kept me going! This was one of those poems when i felt like the sound around me was muffled and the only thing that existed was me ...

    Jul 11, 2011

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Wakeup Call

    This is very good! The emotion here is raw, undefined, and powerful and that's a great style of writing. My friend seems to be going through the same thing. Self-pity ...

    Jul 11, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Poet's soul

    ....That' the best piece of poetry I've seen in a very, and I mean a very long time. Wow, I can't even breath lliterally! This needs to be somewhere, in ...

    Jul 11, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Forsaken

    At long last, a brave soul to utter the name of God! I applaud you :D Now, to the review! My God, why have You forsaken me? Good first verse. ...

    Jul 11, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Here

    Hey there, squirt! This is a nice and simple poem. It's nice the way it is and still it could better. Poetry is about emotion (or lack of depending on ...

    Jul 11, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Angel's Fall

    You've definitely earned a "like" for this one! This is very beautiful and i didn't find it as bad and repetitive as you said. This is amazing and even more ...

    Jul 11, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: When I let my mind wander

    First of all, let me say welcome to YWS! You're going to love it here and just by reading this poem I can tell that you're going to be a ...

    Jul 8, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Perfection

    I'm actually very impressed with this. I had to get up and drink some lemonade because you made me so thirsty! This is so very realistic and it reminded me ...

    Jul 8, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re:

    I agree with Nafe on most of her points. This poem either needs to be heartfelt or funny and entertaining. You fell into a grey area. I wasn't sure if ...

    Jul 8, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Once, I Was Mother Nature

    Hmmm...this is very good and made me think. We humans are so....cocky. we think that we're have such control over everything like its our decision that matter. Yeah, right. One ...

    Jul 8, 2011


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