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Hey there, Just popping in to lend my humble opinions. I am no haiku expert but I will give it a shot anyway. When writing a haiku, because of the ...

I found this lying in the trash- I mean green room- and i thought I might as well give you a review while I wait for you to get back ...

Greetings. And welcome. Here’s a review just for you. (my 6th out of the 125 I’m aiming to do before the end of the year. Honestly, there is only way ...

Yo MVP This is my 5th review out of the 25 I'm aiming for by the end of the year (which is not very far away. As the title admits, ...

Hey I really found this piece both obscure and interesting. I feel like it could be interpreted in many different ways. Is it a generalised piece referring to society's stance ...

Yo, Bugslake. This piece had me sitting at the edge of my seat wanted more. Which is sad because as a short story, there won’t be anymore. But I’m glad ...

Hi there Blimey, First I would like to welcome you to YWS. I hope this place will become as much of a home for you as it for me. I’m ...

Hey there I'm trying to write 125 reviews before the end of the year. This is review number 1, just for you. This is a very captivating piece. Although it ...

Welcome to YWS CFG. Your poem is short but sweet. Few words are used to describe a large idea and you have achieved this through effective imagery for which I ...

Hello Blackwood, As you know I’m doing as many reviews as I can, (I haven’t decided how many yet having given up on doing 400) and I decided to do ...

Hey there friend, I'm trying to review 400 pieces of literature between now and Christmas. And this is review number 2. When reading your poem I find myself reminiscing of ...

Hi there Messenger. I'm trying to complete 400 reviews between now and Christmas and guess what? You are lucky number one. I think I can kinda understand you purpose behind ...

Hey. Wow I love the foreboding note you leave this piece on by repeating the dialogue that originally had been associated with the narrators death. Dialogue that should seem perfectly ...

Hey there. I love your poem. I like your use of alliteration in "wrinkled, runny wrists". I like how your vibrant use of emotive language builds a distinctive picture in ...

Hi there Wow. I love what you are doing here. Sharing your story that is. It is something that is never easy and that makes me look up to you. ...