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Hey, This is one nice story Yoshikrab. I was brought to read this as the topic of your story was very interesting. And the ending seems to be the best ...

Hey, Your topic makes it hard to review but here it is. "no portion (of me) should be stuck in this horse shit screaming and crying in every corner im ...

Hey, I am here to review your work. "It was late on a saturday night, no stars in sight, the cold chill was cruel" It could be "It was a ...

Hey TheRandomWriter Here's for the review. There were a few grammatical errors. While writing a fiction, you must try to be a manipulative a possible. Here you are straightaway writing ...

Hey, This is one nice piece of work. There is something catchy about it and I cannot help but appreciate. Apart from the words, the presentation always help to make ...

Hey EM, This poem is really perceptive. Really touched by your way of putting changes in a relationship as seasons. Anyhow here are some universal facts when writing seasons. 1. ...

Hey, Here's to review. There are various instances in the story like " RING, RING! The school bell rang as grandpa was waiting for her outside school. " Here you ...

Hey Em, Your title "pain" is the most straightforward thing in this title. I mean, you could have done better with title if you used a metaphor like the one ...

Hey U must be suggesting that this is how People meet and move on. This is how I see it. "The new particles that are made vanish in less than ...

Hello, "Weeping Willows". It would have made a "full on" if the name would have been this or something that that brings out nostalgia. Every metaphor that you have used ...

Hey there! There are two titles given to the story mentioned or is the second one just a statement. Nevertheless, the switch between the two memories is seemingly or rather ...

Hey there!. I just happen to come across it and you have elaborated a idea into a great structure. Conversely, I might add that in a lyrical rhythm has to ...