UshertheThird

Hello! I like the dark mood that the language of this poem creates. It does a good job of showing the fear and loneliness of the narrator. I like the ...

Hello! I like the idea here of continuing the story of the Tree of Knowledge. The backstory you created for the tree is very intriguing, and I like the way ...

Hello! I like the theme of this poem, of the importance of unknown things, and not needing a strict definition for your life. I like the repetition in the first ...

Hello! I really like the message of the poem, and the way it's presented gets it across very effectively. I like that it starts off by showing how she feels, ...

Hello, Louisa! I really enjoyed this poem. It has a straightforward message, but it captures the depth of what words mean to people. I like the language that is used ...

Hello WindSailor! This is a very interesting essay, and it makes many good points. The ideas are very well-organized, and the arguments are persuasive. I noticed a few errors, and ...

Hello! I enjoyed this part of the story. I really like how John interacts with his father. The dialogue is believable, and their different viewpoints are well-portrayed. Their relationship brings ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this story. It's a very exciting way to begin a story, and it stays captivating to the end. The narration is very enjoyable to read, because ...

Hello! I really like the character and his voice. The descriptions are great, but some of them are slightly unclear. For example, the wording of these lines makes them difficult ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading this. The narrator is very interesting. He has a strong voice and character, and in some ways he's relatable, even though at first he seems unkind. ...

Hello! I don't read much historical fiction, but I really enjoyed this story. The characterization of the prince is great, which I think is the most important part of the ...

Hello! I enjoyed this poem. The descriptions of the fire and of the character's pain are very strong, and they do a good job of showing what the character is ...

Hello EllaBliss! I enjoyed reading this poem. It does a good job of conveying the narrator's feelings of frustration and anger. "You broke me before." I like this line, because ...

Hello! I like this poem. Even though it's short, it manages to make a point that is very thought-provoking, and I think the conciseness makes it stronger. I like how ...

Hello! I like where you're taking this story, looking at the beliefs of the characters inside and outside the city. Anthem has a lot of interesting themes, and it looks ...