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Re: A Glass For My Father.
hello there, This poem is amazing! It made my eyes teary. Thank you for touching my soul so, R.I.P to your Dad. Beautiful! My favourite lines are: The exact, same ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: More Than the World
Hey there, wow I totally love this poem. It's beautiful, love in it's greatest. The sky seems to glitter in a heavenly hue. The world seems much brighter when I'm ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Forbidden Love
hey there, Quick comment. Very dramatic, I like it because this is something one can relate too. People tend to try and drink pain away, cut it away, cry it ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Letter To My Mother
Hey there, Wow!! I am a Mama's girl all the way and I love it when Mothers are praised so and are showed such love. Couldn't imagine a person actually ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Wonderful Rain
Hey there, I am Gaga for the rain so I like this poem. But it's not only because I'm naturally enamored with anything that has to do with rain that ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: I'm Sorry
Hey there, WOW!! My heart has been broken,crushed, disassembled and then I tried to mend it but its just never been back to normal and in all this I never ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: So get out
Hey there, Wow this is really deep. Emotions is seeping right through and I am completely gripped. Your strength is so evident and I pray that you keep fighting this. ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The shadows
Hey there, This is a very sad poem. Very well-thought out, very well-written. I sympathize with the character and almost driven to tears. Really good stuff. One mistake though: 'Months ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Bad deed
Hey there, This poem is very cute and very true, people do change and we always reminsce hoping one day we can go back. I can totally relate. Bravo! My ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The Joys of Being a Writer
Hey there!! I'm so happy that I'm the first to comment because I am totally in awe with this piece. It is exactly what I feel when I write and ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Descendant - Chapter Two
Hey there, Normally I hate to jump in and comment on the second chapter before I've read the first but this was a must. There is a very intriguing story ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Before.
Hey there, A beautiful piece. I think anyone can relate. It's brilliant! Though I'm all full of praise I did notice one or two little errors. Here they are: "You ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Wait, Before You Go
Wow this is such a beautiful poem. You deserve a round of applause, a pat on the back, etc :). purely ingenious and gripping and amazing. I love how it ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: School time dreaming
Hello there, It seems like u are a first timer. I like the way your poem flows and think its sweet but there are a few errors I thought I ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: 0NE LOVE
Hey I'm not a pro in reviewing raps but I'll give this one a try. It flowed nicely so that's a thumbs up for you. I know rap forgets rules ...
Feb 23, 2011
