Published February 23, 2011
I look outside my window frame,
I see nothing but the whole world going insane,
hey you there!!!am talking to you;
yes I said your name,
how could you give away your soul;
and sell it for fame? shame.
there's no place to call home,
going home is like;
throwing off a far stone,
yes!!! I remember now;
they call it the war zone,
callous,menace own,
armageddon zone.I wanna know.
who built this empire of fire,
like a high voltage flowing through them wire,
let my words come like rain,quenching all the fire,
creating resistance and never ever tire.
All I have,
all that I am;
I give to one sole goal,
I give to you;
I give to all of those who wants to know,
that I've gat an aim,
not for fame,
but to melt those chains,
and free yo'all from all your pains.
We fight for one love one heart,
once lost now we have;
the chance to make our children proud,
so when we grow old,
they can stand bold,
and say some day I'll love to be like dad.
This soldier's getting stronger,
knowing that we are weaker,
we're born to fight,
trained to kill,
about to die,
but never will..
***CHORUS***
This' a far call,this a far cry,
How can we go home?when there's no place to call home,
All we need is
One love yeah,yeah
All we need is
One love,love.
This' a far call,this a far cry,
We can go home.If we build one of our own,
All we need is
One love yeah,yeah
All we need is
One love,love...
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
cool song i like it when you put rap into songs like eminem lol
cool someone. I like it. are you a rapper you need talent to perform that rap
Hey I'm not a pro in reviewing raps but I'll give this one a try. It flowed nicely so that's a thumbs up for you. I know rap forgets rules and grammar and just lets the music speak to them. But a lot of people nag about 'I's not being capitalized and all so you might one fix that before they jump on your case. Just warning a brother.
Anyways good job.
Keep it up.
xx Upile xx