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Re: Thankful
I like this poem a lot. It has a sort of christian feel to it, and I like that about the peice. It could use more vivid words and maybe ...
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: I wish that someone could answer my questions
This is amazing. It fits so well with my current feelings. I was actually about to write something like this, and it has inspired me so much! I love your ...
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Re: Midnight Orchestra
Very eerie to me. The plot was hard to understand at first, but I got it toward the end. I can see a lot of work into this peice, love. ...
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Re: Following Stars
It's so deep, and jagged. Cuts into the dreams of mine and surely others. "They said, don't be so dull. Don't keep your eyes shut your curtains closed your sunshades ...
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: I call suicide hotlines for the conversation, so tell me something about myself
The flow is magnificent. The wording is fantastic. It truly digs deep into every teen's darkest emotions. It's refreshing to see work like this, since it's so rare these days. ...
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: Thankful For Daddy
This is purely amazing. Usually, I don't read things like this. they make me sad and somehow nostalgic. I love the wording, the format; I love this. You are a ...
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: Secret Cries and Hidden Pain
A very dark poem, one might say. As a naive writer myself, I'm not really qualified to tell you how to write this. I think it's amazing, but there is ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: I Will Wait
This is remarkably brilliant. Usually, I read the poems on here, but this is clearly an exeption. It's so deep and passionate, it created clear images in my mind when ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: understand me when I open myself to you
A very elegant, yet mainly metaphoric poem. Flowing and kind, it eases my mind. Gives me hope. Is that just me? haha. Well, either way, I love this. Definitly one ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: Wither
It urks me how 'was' is on it's own line, but other than that, this is amazing. The structure is sound, and the wording is astounding. I usually see peoms ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: Hidden in the Closet
This is amazing. Creative. Slow. I'm in love. Your work is amazing, and your talent shines through the holes in the sotry. It seems like if you were to get ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: A Poem About Your Friend
This is wonderful (: It has a great feel to it, very demanding toward the end. You are a true talent, and I hope to see even more of your ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: A Late Autumn Afternoon
Okay, I'm really bad at I'll try my best. This poem is absolutely stunning. You create an overwelming visual with the words you chose; it was like a movie. The ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: The First Marks
This is brilliant (:
Nov 3, 2012