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  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: My Worst Fear

    As far as I have understood this poem, I assume that you have had an experience like that mentioned in your life before. If that is the case, I would ...

    Jun 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Summoning Persephone part 22

    HOnestly, I am reading the first part of your novel, according to me. And as far as I m concerned, I can conclude that you have made each and every ...

    Apr 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: i thought a shooting star

    First of all, I would like to appreciate your immense dedication in writing this poem(if I m right). In my personal opinion, your poem has revealed the gap between nature ...

    Jan 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i am.

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    Well done (sorry but I need some quick points to publish my work).Well doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell don

    Dec 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Humor Re: A Pity!

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    Sorry but I need some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some ...

    Dec 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Adryan's Promise - Chapter 1.3 (The River)

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    Dec 14, 2017
  • Art » General, General Re: My Favorite Part of Halloween

    I think that you have put in your opinions in a very mature and unprecedented manner. I really suggest you to include some more details about you experience, and actually ...

    Dec 14, 2017
  • Art » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Eyes

    I see that you are a real artist. I would like to say that you could add certain details inside the eyes. As you know, eyes are the most expressive ...

    Dec 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Dear Father

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    IE! Here we are again. I’ll start with the repeat of some basics: You don’t have to begin every line with a capital, and you absolutely need to add some ...

    Dec 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: A Week to Remember

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    Thanks for sharing this very special experience. The rhyming is good and the formatting is interesting and the emotion expressed is convincing. The speaker praises the person spoken to for ...

    Dec 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Adryan's Promise - Chapter 1.3 (The River)

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    Hello!This is my first review and I don't think I am qualified, plus you might get offended, but please bear with me.I didn't read the previous chapters, so I am ...

    Dec 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: What About Joey?

    This story is a work of absolute brilliance. Even though there are some minor grammatical and punctuation mistakes, I believe that you have done a good work.Being a lover of ...

    Dec 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Control

    Hey Legacy! I was just looking for something to review when I came upon your work. I think that you are a great poet as you can interpret the things ...

    Dec 9, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Hospitality Education and Careers

    Hi Ishan, it's Sahil. I hope that this review helps you. I agree with Mayureshb, ur essay had some minor grammatical mistakes, but overall, reading it was a good experience ...

    Dec 9, 2017


Forgiveness is the fragrance that the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it.
— Mark Twain