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Re: My Worst Fear
As far as I have understood this poem, I assume that you have had an experience like that mentioned in your life before. If that is the case, I would ...
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Re: Summoning Persephone part 22
HOnestly, I am reading the first part of your novel, according to me. And as far as I m concerned, I can conclude that you have made each and every ...
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Re: i thought a shooting star
First of all, I would like to appreciate your immense dedication in writing this poem(if I m right). In my personal opinion, your poem has revealed the gap between nature ...
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Re: i am.
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Dec 17, 2017
Well done (sorry but I need some quick points to publish my work).Well doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell doneWell don -
Re: A Pity!
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Dec 17, 2017
Sorry but I need some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some quick points.Sorry but Ineed some ... -
Re: Adryan's Promise - Chapter 1.3 (The River)
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Dec 14, 2017
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Re: My Favorite Part of Halloween
I think that you have put in your opinions in a very mature and unprecedented manner. I really suggest you to include some more details about you experience, and actually ...
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Re: Eyes
I see that you are a real artist. I would like to say that you could add certain details inside the eyes. As you know, eyes are the most expressive ...
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Re: Dear Father
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Dec 12, 2017
IE! Here we are again. I’ll start with the repeat of some basics: You don’t have to begin every line with a capital, and you absolutely need to add some ... -
Re: A Week to Remember
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Dec 12, 2017
Thanks for sharing this very special experience. The rhyming is good and the formatting is interesting and the emotion expressed is convincing. The speaker praises the person spoken to for ... -
Re: Adryan's Promise - Chapter 1.3 (The River)
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Dec 12, 2017
Hello!This is my first review and I don't think I am qualified, plus you might get offended, but please bear with me.I didn't read the previous chapters, so I am ... -
Re: What About Joey?
This story is a work of absolute brilliance. Even though there are some minor grammatical and punctuation mistakes, I believe that you have done a good work.Being a lover of ...
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Re: Control
Hey Legacy! I was just looking for something to review when I came upon your work. I think that you are a great poet as you can interpret the things ...
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Re: Hospitality Education and Careers
Hi Ishan, it's Sahil. I hope that this review helps you. I agree with Mayureshb, ur essay had some minor grammatical mistakes, but overall, reading it was a good experience ...
Dec 9, 2017
