Twinkle4ever

Finally I get to know about the machine boss and he’s hiding behind the curtain. But he’s got one thing right about the humans. They had power but they did ...

Okay, I’m onto chapter 9. Phew! Took me a while. Few nitpicks... “Why don’t we focus on where (we) are going from now on?” I guess you must’ve missed that. ...

Hello! I know it’s been a while since I reviewed your work. I’ve been very busy lately. Finally got the laptop in my hands and some peace and quiet. Firstly ...

Hey I finally got the time to review stuff. And here I am. First of all, I like your description of the thing Leno was lying on. It was rough ...

Hey I finally got the time to review stuff. And here I am. First of all, I like your description of the thing Leno was lying on. It was rough ...

Hey again. I'm onto seven now. I was so engrossed in this chapter. Everything was happening so suddenly and it was all so hectic. I was reading so fast just ...

Alright, it seems like there's a whole lot of suspense in this chapter. The beginning chapters were just introducing characters, places. Here's the main turning point of the story. I'm ...

It seems like there’s a lot more to this story than I’d thought. I never even imagined that there would be dragons in it. That was a very good idea. ...

Hey you've already posted chapter 9. And I'm still stuck on reviewing chapter 4. But it was worth it. I literally don't have any complaints here. Usually I scroll down ...

Okay, there's a good and bad turn of events here. The good thing is that Ryder is finally starting to think straight, at least that's what I think. I'm not ...

Great, now you're actually getting to the part where the real action starts. This chapter was quite interesting except for the big bunch of info. You've described the characters here ...

Oh gosh this chapter was quite interesting. Although I had to read the description about the settlements at least two or three times to stick it inside my head. That’s ...

Here I am. I see you’ve already reached chapter 7. I’ll try to get there soon. Noelle’s already given a great review but here are my thoughts and criticisms. First ...

Aw, no fair. I wanted to be the first to read this... =P So now I see what was going on. I sort of guessed that it would be something ...

That was hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing at every two lines. The part where the inspector says Green and the background noise. You've got a great sense of humour. i ...