Twinkle4ever

Hi again! It's Twinkle. Wow, you've gotten amazingly good at this. I was too engrossed to have noticed when the little chapter ended. And I seriously want to read more. ...

Okay, I am dying to read more now. I hadn't even noticed that the story had ended here. This was so good, you kept revealing things one by one at ...

Hey, Twink here to review. Don't judge this review by its size. The mistakes aren't that much. You'll know once you read. Something stroke(stroked) her mind and her inner conscious ...

Wow... I didn't know something so big could be written about mirrors. I hadn't realized their importance. The part 'The boys of present era are no different from such princesses'. ...

All you've done since my brother and I have been alive is worry about is(us) and take care of us... This was very touching. I read the letter all the ...

I quite enjoyed this. Your choice of words here is very good. It displays a beautiful night with a lake and moon and stars in my mind. I don't think ...

Hey! First of all, I'll have to tell you that there are just too many reviews below and even if I read each and every one of them, I still ...

Eeeep! The ending totally shook me. My heart was at my throat if that's even possible. The beginning needed a little bit more showing than telling but the ending was ...

I see that this time you concentrated more on the description but made sure not to overdo it. But I still don't know what Ela or Tana or any of ...

This is an amazing story. Great plot and description and all. I could visialise everything quite clearly as I read and for the entire time I'd completely forgotten that I'm ...

Hey I tried to get here as fast as I could. This chapter was far better than the last one, got to agree with mysto. Things are starting to get ...

The liquid soothed my throat as I swallowed. (I know you didn’t mean to use past tense here but it happens. Just pointing out so you can change it to ...

Heya! I've read the hunger games and it kept me on edge all the time because so many terrible things would just happen unpredicted. I feel like you have the ...

I’m so glued to the story that I’m here to read and review once again. You used past and present tense both here. It confuse me again. Again, who’s Margaret? ...

Wowee! The emotions of depression and sadness were portrayed in such a way that it literally yanked at my heart. Beautiful poetry. I liked the paragraphing here and the rhymes ...