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  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 16: Hole in the Head (part 1/3)

    Heya Bella! So I've been meaning to review this for a while, and here I am, for the July Review Day! It's been a while since I read the original ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: With Only the Rainforest as Witness - Ch1

    Hey Megrim! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this, but here I am finally! Okay, so I've sort of skimmed through the reviews below mine, but sorry in ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Other Re: Nostalgia - Chapter 1

    Hey Lavvie! Finally made it around to review (I'm kind of procrastinating doing chemistry homework, but to be honest your story's considerably more interesting. I'll try not to repeat anything ...

    Jul 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 8

    Rahim reappears! This made me so excited! Yay! Hello again! Hopefully the over-abundance of exclamation points in this review thus-far is a bit of a clue that this was a ...

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Untitled Fantasy Story: The Chalice of Life: Prologue

    Hey there! Here to review as requested! I think that this chapter has a fir amount of potential. I can see something really strong coming out of this, but there ...

    Jul 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 15: The One That Got Away

    Hey Bella! Finally made it around to review your chapter. Like the others, I can't say that I thought that the bit at the start from Sara's perspective was really ...

    Jul 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 7

    Heya LittleFox! Finally found myself here to review. Sorry about the delay! Writing this on my phone, so hopefully there aren't too,many horrific typos. Apologies in advance. XD I quite ...

    Jun 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Ella [Part 1/3]

    Hey EternalRain! I saw this sitting in the Green Room, and I thought I'd check it out, because realistic fiction's always fun to read and I really like the idea ...

    Jun 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 14: You Oughta Know

    Hey Bella! I've gotten into the groove of reviewing today, so I think I'll keep at it. And then I'll be caught up! Oooh, I liked the way this chapter ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Other Re: Don't Be Afraid To Be Who You Are (Chapter 1) *EDITED*

    Hey Scott. Here to review as requested. Sorry about the delay! :) You've had a fair few reviews that go into a lot of the technical, grammar-y stuff, so I'm ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Say My Name

    Hey Bella! I've got a long weekend, so I thought I'd catch up on some reviewing! So I'm finally here! YAY! Sorry about the exclamation mark overload, by the way. ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Daffodils

    Hi niteowl! This'll just be a short-ish review, as a way of judging the competition, as well as a bit of a thank you for entering my competition. The emotion ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Horror Re: On the Way Out

    Hey rhia! Lucky last review out of all the poetry contest entries! Even if you'll actually be the first review actually published... anyway, I'm essentially here to review as way ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Discovering Ian

    Hiya Augustus! Finally made it to review your piece! Yay! This review is basically a thank you for participating, and also a way of making the judging process that little ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Why He Did It

    Hey Aley. Just dropping by with a review as way of saying thanks for participating in my contest. This is a tricky piece to review. I'm not entirely sure why. ...

    Apr 30, 2015


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