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This is totally not terrible! There's a kind of charm in its simplicity - it's easy to read, and short but sweet. To be honest, there was nothing I didn't ...

I'm going to talk about the preface and 1st chapter separately, because it feels like they're entirely different beasts, and what applies to one doesn't necessarily apply to the other. ...

I liked this a lot. It was short but sweet, and I want to see how it gets resolved! A nice title too. The character relationships seemed really natural - ...

Hello! First off, I love the title. The instant I saw it I thought Okay, I want to read that :-) As a whole, I thought this was really good. ...

Hi! So, I haven't read the original prologue or first chapter, so I'll just talk about how what I've read stands, on its own merits. I enjoyed reading this. The ...

I love historical fiction, and I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the idea of using a letter as a first chapter (an easy way of employing a bit of ...

If I saw a book with this blurb in the bookshop, I would probably seriously consider buying it. You've managed to really hook the reader in by giving the right ...

I quite liked this. The title is absolutely fantastic, and caught my attention right away. The plot is really interesting an suspenseful, and in that respect, I can't fault you. ...

I really liked the style of this piece. The fragmented sentences could have been your story's undoing, however they worked really well, I believe. Somehow, I didn't mind the lack ...

Just a warning, I am doing this on a tablet so thete will be typos. I really liked the plot line and ideas behind this story, but something about the ...

This is an really interesting piece. The character development is fantastic, she's easy to relate to, in how she feels for Dylan, and I think you've managed to really encapsulate ...

I really liked this, and I really enjoy that you've taken a point of view that a lot of stories don't. I reckon that it's pretty effective - there's the ...

This is an absolutely stunning story. I actually got chills reading some parts of this, and the imagery is really beautiful. It's a believable story, and the dialogue is realistic, ...

I really enjoyed reading this. You've created a fantastic voice for your character, and your writing style really suits this type of story. There aren't any grammar mistakes that I've ...

I really liked this piece. Especially since I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes, which is always a plus. There aren't any things that I can really nitpick about, ...