Trelose

Hello there! First, I've got to say I love your way with words. While most poets (including myself) love to target "beautiful" wording, I loved the slightly quirky/playful way you ...

To begin with, I've got to say you approached your subject matter incredibly well. Thank you for that. Also, the formatting made it very easy, yet interesting, to read, so ...

Heya, Stranger! Trelose here. First of all, I like how it addresses the topics and expresses my thoughts on the situation. Well done on that. I'd like if it kept ...

Heya! Trelose here to review this poem, First, I've gotta say that, while I'm not knowledgeable of the two forms you mentioned, I do appreciate how what I sought out ...

-blinks- -blinksblinks- Uh... Heya! Trelose here to review this... odd... piece. First, if your intent was to make me feel as if I was slipping into insanity, I do believe ...

Heya, InfiniteRectangles! First off, I've gotta say that, as someone who loves writing poetry but experiences constant writer's block because I can rarely think of something good enough, I love ...

Hey, Herbgirl! This a nice little poem (though I wish it were longer, but that's preference.) I caught two major errors, however. "I just the words were easier to find." ...

Hey, Scarlet! Oh gosh... I don't know where to begin with this poem, and I mean that in a very good way. This poem honestly left me speechless. Honestly, (and ...

Heya, Matthew! Wording and flow-wise, you did very well with this poem (the first time I compliment something you write!) I find the lack of capitalization at the beginning of ...

Hello, Stranger! (Wow, that sounds mildly sarcastic now that I think about it.) This is an interesting, though slightly confusing poem. I'd appreciate some more detail in the writing, though ...

Hello, Caliconepeta! This is a very, VERY well-written song. I appreciate the imagery in it. It gives a great sense of the feeling you're trying to portray. Very little I ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I'm Trelose. This is a very nice poem and it's very dark and emotional. You did an excellent job of creating the atmosphere from it and, with the ...