Travis

Love your profile picture! :)

I really liked it!!!

Sorry that I didn't help that much. I started to but then got side tracked and forgot about it. Sorry :(

very interesting. Hope you post a part 2!

cool

very beautiful

I really like the name

love the title

It wasn't something in the text, I was just having some trouble that day. I know that sounds weird, but believe me, it wasn't because of something you had written.

First off, thank you. Second off, it is a real place. Everything I described and everything we did is legit

Thank you, for sharing your opinion with me. I'll try to tweak it to make clearer.

Thank you for telling me. I'll try to see what I can do to fix it.

Thank you!

yay!!!!

Thank you Moonwatcher. The reason I rhyme in poems is because I like to challenge myself. I appreciate your suggestions and will consider them. thank you again!