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I have read this story and I just wanted to say that I personally thought it was really good. I really loved the format, a story told completely in the ...

The short story was definitely in the Halloween spirit. I loved the short informal letter format that you used for your story and I thought that I worked very well. ...

Wow. That was beautiful. I have never really thought of thunderstorms in such a beautiful way. I love the ending were you refer back to the title. The clock part ...

This poem is very well written. It made me think of Dauntless. (Dauntless is my divergent faction. One metaphor witch really stood out to me was "They have an umbrella ...

Wow! I love the metaphors in this fantastic poem! You refer to speech being a kind of liquid and I love it. The cliff hanger about what she saw in ...

Quite creepy! That could make an epic novel! Imagine a world were you can hear the voice of your one true love. Or maybe only one person can hear the ...

Wow! good poem. It made me think about how so many people are so emotionally attached to what is little more than pixels. The part about crying made me think ...

I love the opening paragraphs where Mason tries to commit suicide. In the first part where Mason tries to commit suicide there is plenty of fabulous imagery and the description ...

Wow. Deep. That is quite sad. I'm not saying that you should try to write about 'fluffy bunnies and rainbows' it's just that that is really depressing. On a more ...

Lovely poetry. I really like the bit that goes 'finally the burning sun kisses the crimson sea'. Some lovely metaphors. It's a really nice poem that paints beautiful pictures in ...