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TranscendingIllusion

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Horror Re: My Garden

    Hey! Really liked this poem, the concept was great. For me, it was about someone who has had their life slowly wilt away over the years, and at the start ...

    May 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Monster

    Hey! Haven't been on here in a very long time and having just read your poem I'm glad that I did. I love this poem, the concept and meaning of ...

    May 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Absolutely love this poem. No words can describe how perfectly you got your message across. I'm gay myself but that really doesn't make a difference to this review or how ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Dull Pencils

    Good little poem that I think speaks to everything. As I'm writing this review I should probably be working haha I like how simple to kept the poem, no fancy ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: When the sweet child swims

    Oh wow, I love this poem so much. The imagery you created with your use of metaphors is just incredible. Its also amazing how you fitted so much into such ...

    Feb 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: And Death said to Life

    Holy wow. This poem is absolutely amazing! I love the concept of life and death talking to each other, but the ending of how in a way death is the ...

    Sep 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: bones

    Hey, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I love the idea of it and how you imaginatively described what was happening. I really liked how the poem started, the line ...

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: How Long?

    I really like this poem, just because I feel everyone at some point has fancied someone who you are actually friends with, or who is at least kind to you ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Each by the Other

    I think this is quite a cute poem, that reminds me of two young people who might well have been in school finding each other; or at least that is ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Valley

    I'm writing you another review because I can never find any criticisms for your work, they are always easy to read and draw incredible imagery in my mind. I like ...

    Jun 2, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Pool in the Brush

    This is such a beautiful poem with incredible vision. Each line that you used to describe the poem I was easily about to see in my mind as I read ...

    Jun 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Painter

    Absolutely love this poem. I have never read a poem about an artist and found myself smiling as I read through it. When I got to 'With his back arched, ...

    Mar 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: I wasnt ready...

    I really like the idea of this poem, its always good to read a horror poem; they really speak to me. Without sounding deranged I feel you could have gone ...

    Mar 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chalk Drawings

    I really enjoyed reading this, I wrote a poem myself a while ago on a similar topic (that is if I have understood yours correctly) and I feel like this ...

    Mar 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sinking into another night

    Really like this poem, I find that the last stanza always defines the poem, and with yours its done so beautifully. Once I had read the last stanza the poem ...

    Mar 9, 2013


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy