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Hell, this hit me hard. Great work portraying that feeling of insignificance that so many students experience. The first line is especially effective- 'I am entirely absent' - and offers ...

Hi, not to be blunt, but is this how you're really feeling? Not that I don't understand, because, irritatingly enough, I really do. The questions you bring up are some ...

I'm sorry sir, you failed to scare me off at 'don't read if Christian', ha. It's unfortunate though that I agree with the majority of what you're saying- hell, if ...

This is a really nice song. One thing that I noticed though is that it's very soft-sounding, while the word 'abandon' seems slightly heavier. It just seemed harsher in comparison ...

Ouch, that poem burned deeply. You told the plot well, and the way you subtly laid out an entire story within three stanzas is impressive. I don't quite understand the ...

Hi, just one thing first- "Littered down the path of self loathing ad hate", I'm guessing you meant 'and hate'. Otherwise, well done with this. It's well written and soulful, ...

I applaud your poem and your opinion, good sir! That was very well said! And your title makes me smile. I'm not sure which sexuality you're talking about, or I ...

The structure seems odd, though it highlights the madness lying in your poem. Each emotion was fiery and real, and it really resounded with the idea of a candle and ...

I like how you kept the ambiguous air to your poem. It was clever and well thought out. For some reason I had read the first half of it believing ...

Firstly, "chocking" is to stop the movement of a wheel with a chock, so I'm guessing you mean "choking". "Goanna" I assume is "gonna" and the comma in the line ...

That was rather interesting! It felt as though I was taking a journey through the mirror room in the carnival! It was very lyrical, though a few lines felt as ...

Some of the rhyming sounds slightly forced, but overall the poem is easy to relate to and well written. I mean, we all know how much being a teen sucks- ...

I like your poem and the concept behind it- the use of "memory" to reinforce the title at the end is very effective. Perhaps your grammar is a little off ...

This is rather sad! Ouch, my weak heart! It was very lyrical and was cleverly written- I applaud you for that. Being emotionally weak I easily could have cried- it ...

I liked this poem more than I thought I would- and not in a rude way, but rather I thought it might "just" be a romance that I'd gush over ...