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This is an exciting story! I really think it definitely has some great potential to be an engaging interesting piece. I think as far as characters go, you have an ...

Hello there! This is a nice piece, but I noticed that you have some mixed tenses going on in it. For example, in this sentence here, you have two tenses: ...

Hey there! What a great piece! You did an awesome job and it was so much fun to read. I'm going to give you some general feedback and then get ...

Hey there! First of all, wow, this is a really intense poem. Well done for putting so much into it! There's so much raw emotion in it, but I actually ...

Hi there! Tobodlygo here for a review! Firstly, I wanted to bring up the formatting. I think it could be better done, perhaps by only bolding the Girl's POV and ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo go here, both for a review and to give some advice (since you asked). First of all, I do like this piece. You have a good start ...

Hey there! First off, I really like this idea you have. Is it going to be a chapter book or a short story? It's a nice story and I'm interested ...

Hey there! Happy NaPo 2019! So the first thing I noticed is the formatting. Since this was a huge pain for me to figure out, I'm going to pass on ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Overall, I like the piece. I have a couple of concerns about it that I'm going to mention first. First, I'm very concerned ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for another review! Overall, it's a great chapter. I definitely enjoy the story and how you're choosing to tell it. It's very engaging and it captures ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Overall, this is a great piece and you did a good job writing it. Your characters are engaging and there's a strong element ...

Hello! Before I continue, I'd just like to say that I love that you cite your wikipedia source for the color cyan. That was actually a really good thing to ...

This is a fantastic poem! It seems so sad to me, but in a way that's relatable, because this is a situation faced by people all over our society. This ...

Hiloa loa! Toboldlygo here for a review! So, before I even read it, I had to laugh at your description of Peppurrcorn. Very cute! Since you labeled it fanfiction, I ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here on this wonderful Review Day! First, wow. Just, wow. This was such a powerful piece! I'm really impressed! I like how you refer to the motorcycle ...