ToSaferHarbours

I'm not sure if I should space out the lines and the indentation to make it more dynamic ... I have to submit this by the end of November so ...

You probably have talent, but I couldn't really tell because of all the punctuation and grammatical errors! It was nearly impossible to read the story. For example, in this sentence, ...

And I thought I wrote depressing poetry xD This was a piece, if gothic stuff is your thing - and I've got to say it's not my favorite, but I ...

I thought this was good. Although carbonCore is right - the font was way too small and it was an information overload. There are other ways to convey backstory other ...

Kind of an interesting short, but really, it had no emotional or intellectual value at all. It was really disturbing too, but in the most boring way possible. I agree ...

Wow, I really liked this! Beautiful and terrific quality :) I enjoyed how you numbered the stanzas with Roman numerals. It gave it a bit of a "short vignettes" feeling, ...

I liked this poem. It was so brief, and it was the kind of poem you want to read several times. I loved the lines where you said, "There was ...

I really loved this poem. Combining the theme of secrets with the setting of the seaside was great! I love how every stanza gives a slightly different view of your ...

I really really loved this poem. I spoke to me so much ... "Do you see the scars under the hand? Wrists are not for chains to hold back; they ...

Wow, I really liked this poem! It kind of reminded me of a story I'm writing right now. I really liked the desolate feeling you gave this poem, and a ...

I really loved this poem. It flowed really sharply and the images were very clear and cutting. Great job!