TinyJarStoredDreams

Thanks! I'm gonna maybe apply a couple of these changes later when I'm not so busy. :)

My thoughts usually control me. Thanks for the tip of encouragement c:

Hey Tiny here! First off thanks for tagging me to review this marvelous piece! But sadly I don't have any advice for you. This was a wonderful poem with good ...

Thanks for the review! Also I did use this from personal experiences hence me being the nerdy kinda quiet kid.

Fixed it!

Thanks c:

It was romantic, his wife died of old age/illness he misses her deeply. Peter (the old man) Visits her often leaving a note each time while other visitors only stay ...

Thanks! I've changed it a bit, I didn't even realize those until you pointed it out.

Thanks, I tried creating an image of how quickly war used to go at that time. That's why it all happened in a blink of an eye.

I wrote this from a crazed stalkers point of view so I was trying to make it seem like he was going deeper and deeper into insanity. Thanks for reviewing ...

Thanks c:

Thanks, this is my first time writing anything in historical fiction c:

Thanks c:

Aww thank you

Aw I'm sorry I made you cry